Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Some short poetry.

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1---   I touched her tattoos on the softness of her skin on her leg.
I tasted her skin and I whispered.
You are a wonder, a mystery and a miracle.
2---  My pretty gal, my softest touch.
You occupy my hopes and my dreams.
In your eyes, I feel warm and magically.
3---  Beneath those beautiful coffee brown eyes.
I can see glimpses of the sea, the sun and the moon.
You are my north star, allowing me know.
Love is safe and kind.
4---  Darkness can overtaked me.
The light of hope had fallen.
Once dreamer is sleeping.
When you want nothing.
What is left?
Dancing Coyote

© 2021 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Some words.

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The feeling of love in this is raw and dedicated. Your choice of songs adds another deep layer, but your writing truly holds it all, nostalgia, the feeling of love, bittersweetness, and sadness. You convey all of these emotions in a way that continuously pulls you in with each piece you write. Thank you for writing so deeply and sharing it with everyone, and I have to say I love the comparison of coffee with brown eyes, that was so smart. My favorite line, though, is 'when you want nothing. What is left?' Beautiful piece, here!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I try sometime to write short poetry. I appreciate .. read more



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A romantic, sensual love poem with great images; "Coffee brown eyes" really stand out; they are so clear, one can see glimpses of the sea; when darkness overtakes you, and you want nothing, what is left???
good question.
Best, Betty

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

It is a very good question dear Betty. I have asked often in my lifetime. Thank you for reading and .. read more
The feeling of love in this is raw and dedicated. Your choice of songs adds another deep layer, but your writing truly holds it all, nostalgia, the feeling of love, bittersweetness, and sadness. You convey all of these emotions in a way that continuously pulls you in with each piece you write. Thank you for writing so deeply and sharing it with everyone, and I have to say I love the comparison of coffee with brown eyes, that was so smart. My favorite line, though, is 'when you want nothing. What is left?' Beautiful piece, here!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I try sometime to write short poetry. I appreciate .. read more
Dreams never really sleep. All four of these short poems are ultra-romantic and just lovely, John. Love does guide us. Unfortunately, not always to the right destination! Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I agree dear Lydia. Love is a wild dance. Thank you for reading and the comment.
You occupy my hopes and my dreams.
In your eyes, I feel warm and magically....

How romantic and breath-taking and inspirational these words are, Coyote.
I hope one day I will inspire that in my future mate.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I hope you do. Love is hard work. Need steady reminders and two willing hearts. Thank you dear poet .. read more
Your authors note do not do this poem any justice, this poem is like morning fresh air to me.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Thank you dear Cassie. I appreciate the kind words.
Oh how You say "some words"?! they are wondrous, magical, miraculous words. the Dancing Coyote always dance to love's rythme, to the tunes of magic, to the spell of softness and tenderness. Beautiful my friend... beautiful...

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Thank you my kind friend for reading and the comment. I appreciate the positive words.
lightsong

3 Years Ago

You are so welcome, You deserve them all ❤️
Coyote, this was such a wonderful little poem!
"You are my north star, allowing me know.
Love is safe and kind."
I loved these lines, referring to your love as your North Star, guiding your way into her heart...so romantic!!! The poem is very sweet and I loved reading it. Your sharing is greatly appreciated, my friend!!!

100000000000/100

Nix ❤️️

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Thank you dear poet for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Nix is typing...

3 Years Ago

You're so very welcome :)
The north star is poignant.
To have that kind of woman is grace.
Never leave a tattoo untouched.
No matter where it is

Posted 3 Years Ago


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"You are my north star, allowing me know.
Love is safe and kind."

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another Neruda in the making. This brings so many emotions out and flavors. Darkness can be powerful and overwhelming. You write with much experience in life sir...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Thank you my kind friend. I appreciate the generous words.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome sir...

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