Something is wrong with me. Verbal poetry.

Verbal poetry.

Thank you for listening.

   Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for listening.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Maybe I’m where I’m suppose to be and maybe I’m not. Maybe I didn’t drink enough. Those are strong lines.

Who knows where exactly we are suppose to be?! I think only God knows that. We can ponder it over and over again and many times we never com up with an answer to that particular question. Sometimes we can feel it in our bones and know but often times we do not.

I think there are times when we drink too much and then there are time we have not. That is another paradox. One in which is different for each person and each situation specifically.

Amazing spoken word poetry you have here dear friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my dear friend for reading and the comment. In old age. We know more, understand more and we re-do things done in our mind. If we are lucky. Maybe we can become better.

[Poetic Beauty]

The ultimate goal is to become a better person. And for each of us that is a different journey

[Tina]

Nice read , hope to see more.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Tina. I appreciate the kind words.

[Laz K.]

Something is wrong with all of us.
I like to listen to poetry readings, and I enjoyed this one, too.
You have met Bukowski - that's quite something.
I think we can agree on one thing: having poetry in our lives is a blessing.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. I didn't know who he was. He was just someone to talk to on my travel in California. He was a cool guy. He liked people, who didn't want to be better than other people. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Amazing poem and speaks true to the heart of writing. We suffer for our art, whether debt is paid fast or long lasting we will pay our dues. And for our anguish most times we are given to profound and enlightened thought. It is all we will ever leave behind, for those to follow after. Thank you, CP, for this remarkable poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Carlos for reading and the comment. We must experience life to create something worthwhile.

[Marina]

This was a pleasant surprise to encounter. From my brief time on the cafe, I have come to understand that you are one of the most passionate poets on this site; one who truly gives a part of yourself to the craft and the written word, without prejudice or untruths. So, it was wonderful to hear your words here, the pauses and expression and the creativity in your poem and it's format. It's a privilege to listen to and read your words, dear Coyote. May your love for the poetry always endure. 💛

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Marina. I appreciate the comment my dear friend. I loved writing for over 50 year now. Us, who love words. Need places like the W.C.

[Zaliodir]

As ever you bring the tears to my eyes and the emotion in my soul. Just beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Zaliodir. I appreciate the kind words.

[emmajoy]

To see and hear you means more than a billion words, John. Who you are is in every word, sincerely and emotionally to the nth degree. Your glances at the camera beckoned me nearer. After so many years... I know you more.. Now, will raise a glass, applaud then - wipe my tears away.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Emma. I believe verbal poetry is our future. I love to see the poets or writers face when they read their work. I hope you are doing well and enjoying the days of Summer.

[Relic]

Such a pleasure to hear your voice on this, Coyote. You're the most dedicated writer here and it shows.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my kind friend. Us ,who love the words. We need as place to read and to write.

[Fran Marie]

this is so beautifully delivered
in the spirit in which it is spoken
defining each word in truth
with such deep emotion.

.im in awe
of your written, spoken
and visual art..as always
dear John
well done

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Fran and thank you for listening. I appreciate the kind words. I hope you feeling good and enjoying the days of July.

[mattavelli]

Hey, Coyote! :)
That was beautiful. Maybe you didn't drink enough... Right now there's an empty seat at a tiki bar somewhere down in the keys, with kind women and napkins to write poems on.

[Coyote Poetry]

I need the Tiki bar my friend. Thank you for reading and the comment.