A true love of mine.

BEAUTIFUL NATI DREDDD SONGS AND POETRY FOR THE PRECIOUS SCOTTISH GAL. I LOVED ONCE.

A true love of mine…

Once a Scottish gal, I did love.

We found love on a warm Spring day and

I loved her voice.

She talked of Scotland and she asked me.

My mother told me,

a soldier love, a foolish love.

The damn soldier just want to drink,

the damns soldier boys just want to dance and

they just want to steal kisses and run away.

Will you run away from me?

I told my auburn beauty with the eyes of sea.

After I heard her voice,

after I held her hands,

after I kissed her rosy lips.

I will run to you, never away.

Once upon a July afternoon,

my Scottish gal and me.

We danced at the Scarbourough Fair and I told her,

Beautiful Sheena, please dear Sheena.

Please dance with me,

please talk to me.

Let’s find our place where love can grow and

I want to marry you.

We will have many babies and I will always make you smile.

She told me. Dear Johnnie.

A promise is a promise.

When a Scottish girl love you.

They love forever.

Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Dennis Wolf]

Interesting. I still think your approach to poetry is quiet interesting. I've come across many different styles on this site.. While it is entertaining and interesting to read, I don't really think I'd do so well with poetry... So, my criticism is likely not worth too much.

I'll give it another read later today and see what kind of suggestions come up.

Cheers

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dennis. Nati Dredd, the singer of the song, made me write this one. I do love those Scottish gals with the prettiest voices.

[Dennis Wolf]

Yeah I can see why.

It was a good read

[andrew mitchell]

Although I have a Scottish heritage I unfortunately have not been there. Lovely stunning country and those red hair Scottish lasses are a treat with their accent but you wouldn’t want to make one angry. Lovely writing as always John.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did once Andrew. They become thunder storms. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[DIVYA]

A beautiful girl from a beautiful country.
This love story was so captivating.
You capture those moments perfectly, dear Coyote.
Some words are for keeps...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Divya. In poetry and in story. We can keep the old dreams alive.

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Scotland is a beautiful country. It is one of those places I would love to visit. Somehow this poem brings a little, purpple flowers in my mind. A sweet breeze. A meadow.

Always glad to read your writings.

[Coyote Poetry]

Scotland is so beautiful dear Sarah. You would love. Kindest and sweetest people. Just don't to keep up with in drinking whiskey. They can drink. Thank you kind and dear friend for reading and the comment.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Scotland is the land of my ancestors which is weird because I hate the cold and Scotland looks so cold to me; however, a red-haired lass just might change my mind. Did she change your mind, Johnnie?

Winston

[Coyote Poetry]

I was twenty years old soldier Winston. New wars came and I lost her. The song of Nati Dredd reminded of a good day. I do love the red hair Scottish gals who could talk so sweet. I have been listening to dear Nati Dreddd for two days. One of my bad decision. Dear Sheena was right. Those soldiers wanted everything and they wanted nothing. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Red Brick Keshner]

It's always good when the loved does love forever. Fleeting love like some are so easily disposed to disposes of the greatest gift that we could offer each other. And that is all the more sadder.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Frederick. I was listening to the Scottish song. Took me to a good place and thank you for reading and the comment.