Please swirl me, one more time..

Good evening from Michigan.

Please swirl me, one more time..

1- She told him. Please don't forget me my love.

Tonight we dance with the sea near and 

the sound of the ocean is our needed song.

Please swirl me a hundred more times tonight and

allow the moon to kiss our faces.

Some day we will need this memory.

Please swirl me, one more time.

2- We need to listen to the sea,

we need to listen to the forest.

We need to put our feet into the flowing river.

We need to be kind to each other.

We must ask our family, we must ask our friends.

Are you okay?

We must lead with kindness, concern and

keep hope alive for the struggling people.

We must protect the sea, the forest and the flowing river.

They are part of us, too.

Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

There was something very primal about the thought that we need to hear the ocean. It is a beautiful song. Your litany of needs owns truth. I feel like mankind is working hard on saving the planet. Amazing stories about things humans are doing these days. Your poem swirls in my mind and I like it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you William for reading and the comment. We need to be kind to each other and nature.

[Sami Khalil]

The whole world need to heed this call and swirl in bygone dreams of a better place. Needless to say, you have your way of conveying what is at play.
Keep your messages alive.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sami. I appreciate the kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir Coyote.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Sometimes all it takes to make the world right again is just one more swirl! Beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear friend. And then, some more. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Great message in your epic style of delivery. Thanks for sharing.

Winston

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Winston for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Perdition]

Whoa!...won't even bother to try with this one...it's the repeating of the needs that says it all...It IS always the sea, isn't it? Perfect rhythm and poetry at its finest Coyote. Thanks~

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my kind friend. I appreciate the comment.

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Loving thoughts. The world would be a much better place if we could do that.

Thank you for sharing it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Sarah and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[DIVYA]

Such a wistful expression of love. We have so much to love and appreciate in our lives. Our loved ones, family and friends. The beautiful oceans, skies and forests around us and also within us. We must tell them we appreciate and love them. We must nurture each and everyone of them. Before they become buried in the sands of memories. A heart-rending poem, dear Coyote. Thank you for reminding us of what really matters in this brief life on earth.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Divya. The gift of friendship and the beauty of nature. We need to appreciate and return back.

[DIVYA]

Indeed, we do. You're most welcome, dear Coyote.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is beautiful and timely...earlier this afternoon, I watched the last 45 minutes of "Shall we dance"
with Fred Astaire and Ginger Rogers....my those two were fun to watch dance together.
this poem....struggling people, yes, they should get to dance again...they really must.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

We must Jacob. You and me. Costa Rica we shall go and we will dance with some tropical beauties. Thank you for reading and the comment. My friend.