Wounded angel.

Wounded angel.

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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A very old poem with a re-write.

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Wounded Angel

A Poem by Coyote Poetry

  Wounded Angel..


 My sad  friend.
Please smile for me.
Please stay with me by the sea all night.

Your world has fell apart and
you don’t know right from wrong.
Desperate acts had left you feeling
dirty and insulated from everyone.

Please take my hand.

Walk with a man who had swims in s**t most
of his life.

Ain’t no real Angels on this Earth.
Only us struggling to make amends.

We all must do things we are ashamed of.
World isn’t clean anymore.
Not enough helping hands.

Ain’t no pity for the people in plight today.
I know we get fatigue and humiliated to
believing we are worthless and destitute.

Broken Angel.
Please take my hand.
Walk with a contaminated man.
Jaded kisses and broken promises had
left me empty.
The not so sweet taste of life has turn me bitter.

The sad woman whisper.
I’m a dumping ground for men
who want to use and abuse.
I don’t mean much to no-one.

I  touch her face and
I told her.
We must ascend from the malingering hell.
Leave the one’s who want you to beg for mercy.

Ain’t no easy road.
Sometime we must get up.
Tell the world to back away.

Find a better path to be on.
Find kinder and better people to befriend.

Please my broken Angel walk with me.
Take my hand.
The new day is rising from the East.

           Coyote
            Oct1986

© 2023 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
All of us need kindness.

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Really Fabulous meditation Coyote - truly we have all been there, and if not yet in some cases, it has yet to happen. We must keep fighting the good fight and strive to be better whatever cards Life may deal to us ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

I agree my friend. We must go forward in the storm of life. Thank you for reading and the comment.



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Really Fabulous meditation Coyote - truly we have all been there, and if not yet in some cases, it has yet to happen. We must keep fighting the good fight and strive to be better whatever cards Life may deal to us ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

I agree my friend. We must go forward in the storm of life. Thank you for reading and the comment.
Is hard going away from your amended poem, sir. Its powerful exchange hits home in every way, Perhaps the layout being different from many past written, has given you a new insight into life, its failings, other people's wretchedness aligned with yours. Think in a nutshell this post is loaded with so much emotion, it seems to hit this reader's senses via journey in space, you to me. fighting its way through the miles, threads, glass and more. A more than extraordinary poem, John

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Thank you dear Emma for reading and the comment. All of us need kindness and mercy.
emmajoygreen

9 Months Ago

How very, very true. Kindness is said to be forgetting self.. ..
John,
you almost always stun me with fascination of saying things I remember saying but never did:
“take my hand
walk with this contaminated man
jaded kisses and broken promises had
left me empty “

Outstanding.

Winston

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

Thank you Winston for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.
Definitely we all need kindness...
And your work simply expressed the feelings of millions untold.
So true and touching.
Wonderful work!!!
It holds my heart...

Keep penning:)

Posted 10 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

Thank you dear Soyam for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate. All of us need the mercy of ki.. read more
Soyam

10 Months Ago

Definitely, Mr. Coyote is!!!

:)
The_Ancient_Rock

10 Months Ago

;)

Great minds think more or less alike...

Or so they say...
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It's a sad thing to be made to feel worthless. I think it's the people you hang out with sometimes. Good, supportive, and positive thinking friends are a treasure.
Good stuff.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

Sometimes, the world can be hard. Where I live. I walk my grandchildren to the bus stop with 15 moth.. read more
I so feel this because I know these people. Different location and different individuals but the same feelings and problems. At a loss to help but hoping. Beautifully constructed John.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

Thank you Ken for reading and the comment. All of us need the mercy of a friend.
Everyone deserves several chances in life

We have all made mistakes including me many

Thanks for this life message in your good write
Take care John

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

I agree dear Julie. All of us the mercy of kindness. Thank you for reading and the comment.


I had to pause mid way through my first reading in order to catch my breath .. This felt so real, I felt like a fly on the wall, watching in awe but helpless to do anything but nod in agreement .. it costs nothing to be kind does it brother C .. but the effects when given freely are priceless .. as is this Wounded Angel poem .. Neville



Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

Thank you Neville for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate. I agree. We need more kind words .. read more
Yes Coyote we all need kindness and the feeling that someone cares. It seems that there has been a loss of humanity for what ever reason and this is too bad. There are still good people that care they are just harder to find.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

I agree Soren. We need to lead with concern, kindness and listen. Thank you my friend for reading an.. read more
A splendid timeless poem of what life is in this planet. We were, are or will somehow one day be broken is part of the experience as humans here, but kindness....ohhhh if everyone learned that would certainly be much easier. I do believe in angels, specially the ones we can't see but can call upon them when we are broken! Absolutely great writing dear friend 👏👏👏

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

Thank you dear Silmara. I believe in angels too.

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