Angela

Angela

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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We can fall so low and deep. Need someone to pull us up to see daylight.

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            Angela

 
Her beauty has lessen with time.
The circle of darkness surround her beautiful blue eyes.
Lack of sleep and proper diet.
Left her beaten, betrayed and dreams limited to daily survival.
In her 21 years of life.


Her blue eyes brought me to her.
Her long legs that went on for miles.
Were still temptation for the soul wanting too little now.

 
Her fearless eyes turn soft as she tremble in the face of tenderness.
I tell her please stay with me. We will have no secrets.

 
I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you.

 
We have nothing to lose.
All we have is painful and harsh desires that brought us together.

 
Sweet Angela looks into my eyes.
Searching.


She tells me I'm dirty with sin.
I have abandon all who have try to love me.
I don't deserve you.
Her hand holding my hand so tightly.

 
I whisper my fallen Angel.
There are few saints anyway.
I will take you places you have never been.
We will walk on long beaches.
Drink wine and talk till the sun falls into the sea.
I will hold you like you were my first love.

 
When the dusk come.
We eat and talk.
Fall on my soft bed.
I will find your secret softness.

 
I will whisper a liar pray.
Tell you how beautiful and wonderful you are.
 I will explored you with delight and discover all your  hidden secrets.

 
I look into  her blue eyes as her slender body move over my flesh.
 A small tear appear.
She whisper I will leave before the morning light.

 
I smile and caress her beautiful face.
Whisper we have lost nothing.
I just wanted to see your smile and hear your voice.

 
I will be here when you need me.
Angela kisses me and lays her head into my chest.


                 Coyote
                                      

© 2010 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
When we fall down so low. Someone must pull us back and show us the way to peace and happiness again.
Coyote



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Sometimes in life you fall and sometimes you are just lucky enough to have that special someone who helps you along. I loved the lines:
"I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you."
Beautifully written. Loved it.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Beautifully written... Loved how it was so clear to see the image you was trying to get across... Well done!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riveting. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

once again, i am astounded by the use of words and imagery in your poetry, there is no stopping your talent, is there? color me very impressed. it is an honor to read poetry of tenderness that is written so feelingly and profoundly, and this subject matter is not unknown to me, so it touches very deeply. well done, coyote!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice, Cheers!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks for the beautiful and sensuous story poem that has tinges of sadness. Well told and good story about a love affair. Hope that Angela is happy where she is now.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a truly wondrous thing found in love and acceptance.. turning to one who has been so hurt... so beat down... and finding a deep joy in a singular moment of passion. So beautifully bittersweet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a tremendous peice which stands on it's own and has it's own right . good choice of words and i like this peice because on here , sometimes i've read poems and there's nothing that holds them up like a structure which without a story on it's back , it falls apart but this isn't true or visible in your writings as you have a story behind it's back . great write , keep it up because you're doing excellent and inspiring some many .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Sad really, yet so powerful,
Sometimes we all fall, but have to find our own way back up.
Very intriguing piece, enjoyed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very touching, I'm at loss for words. Favorited.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good, love your detail, the ending shocked me. Nicely written...xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


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