Bloody Carnival

HIV, Starvation and War. Hard to see the good in this world.

 Bloody Carnival

















Disoriented and disenchanted with my world around me.


The carnage and blood thirst of war overpowered the men  and
woman of peace.


Asylum of crazed leaders need to be put down like rabid dogs.

The innocent children are betrayed and dismissed as only
body counts.


Causes and clauses blind the common man.
We must stand in the place of the people in the war zones.


Feel the fear and emotion of death always being near.
Hunger and violence all around you.


The bloody Carnival of death growing by the second.


In Africa today.
30,000 will die of starvation.
30,000 will die of HIV.
Pray for men, woman and children fighting to stay alive.


More Soldiers to Afghanistan.
Going to places who do not want our help.


They want to be left to their own decisions.
Their direction and dreams must be allowed to happen.


The obsession and desire for more blood will destroy all that
is beautiful and good.


The horrendous cost  of war could feed and give a place
 to live to  every human being in this world.


The tyrants and men of hate.
Must learn from the men and woman in their countries.
War must end.

Mercy for the children.
Everywhere please.


                         Coyote
                         22 June 2009

Author's Note

I feel we must change directions. I asks my leaders why are we in the Middle East? They have no answers. Terrorist have been around for 3000 years at least. Better to have strong borders protection and proper security. There is no defense for crazed men who will died for a religion. We must protect the borders and allow the Middle East figure out what they want.

Reviews

[Broken.buddy]

War is a very sensitive topic,
more sensitive when it comes to religious war.

I fail to understand why people would want to die for a religion.
when all religions say god is one, but with many names

Terrorists are around for 3000 years
but killers are around for much longer than that and its a basic instinct in every human

The more you desire for something, the more you want it
the more you want it, the more you will go behind it
and when this gives a clash, the person becomes defiant
defiancy leads to deadly desire, and nothing can stop that man from achieving what he wants.
Desire is the root cause of all evil

Everybody is rich in this world (rhetorical, read in religious sense)
But the way you spend things will make others seem more richer

Evrybody is poor in this world(rhetorical, read in religious sense)
but the way you understand things makes others seem poorer.

Border protection is important ,but no system is 100% secure.
People need not change the way they think
People need to change the way they understand others

Every War has a beautiful reason to start and a terrible reason to end.And if the End justifies the means ,as the saying goes I should accept with your point ,and every war is a failure

There is a saying in Telugu and it roughly translates as this :

The people who say that killing others is the only way to live
and to live, you have to kill
will they ever realise that they are their own enemies?

A wonderful piece of poetry , you have written down.However ,I should say , It falls flat when compared to the Killer on the Road.Rating : 100/100

[Zandraj.jewels]

WOW! I totally agreed with you about this very dramatic piece of writing
I believe even though this is an intake of just my listening and seeing; war been
amongst us for every!!! and most of it is religion, power in control and etc....
true some issues need to be taken care of in their own homeland but for my little
of understanding American desire to be a mother to all and all don't always
want that mothering love . Very touching, I like.

[KaySea]

wow. amazing

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Coyote Poetry, I love the fact that you are political with your poetry. That you express a message. It's probably why you get so many reviews. I think the title, "Bloody Carnival," is an interesting title, and pulls the reader in. I thought it was going to be a poem about a literal carnival, a macrabe horror poem, but I realized it was much more of a mature piece than that.
great job

[KL]

Couldn't have said it better myself. Funny how the brainwash exists on both sides.

[Ice QueenJen]

this was great- and they keep trying to keep it a religious war which has been going on for centuries. I still have been dumbfounded by people who train there children to become human bombs, instead of letting them grow up as normal children. Although for them, I don't think they know what normal is.... but this was a great writing. It not only states the facts of what is actually happening in our world, but makes a person think. Why can't we let them take care of their own land, and people. Like yes we should secure our borders, but Mexico should take care of there side also. great write Coyote!

[Inci]

that's a great write sir the thought behind is wonderful and the title "bloody carnival" for war is very well thought too

[samantha]

wow i felt that poem, every word of that poemplease keep up the good work hun

[Nianque]

You ask the many questions that others fear to speak but they keep locked in their head. Thanks for making me think and question the world around me. Great poem.

[Haifa]

Great poem and it has a very honest feeling. I always agree with you, I just wish to see the peace in everywhere. I hate wars, I hate to see people dying everyday because of something silly and can be solved by talking. Again, well done.

[Dillon Cotter]

Wow, amazing write here. You have my resoect my friend. Nice job.