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Torn Angel

Torn Angel

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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We must be kind to people. Enough negative folks in this world.

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Torn Angel

My  broken Angel.
Please smile for me.
Stay with me at the sea all night.


Your world has fallen apart.
You don't know right from wrong.
Desperate acts had left you feeling
dirty and insulated from everyone.


Please take my hand.
Walk with a man who swims in s**t most
of his life.


There's no angels on this Earth.
Only us struggling to make amends.


We all must do things we are ashamed of.
The world isn't clean anymore.
Not enough helping hands.


There is no pity for the people in plight today.
I know we get fatigue and humiliated to
believing we are worthless and destitute.


My wounded Angel.
Please take my hand.
Walk with a contaminated man.
Jaded kisses and broken promises had
left me empty.
The not so sweet taste of life has turn me bitter.


Sad Angel whispered.
"I'm a dumping ground for men
who want to use and abuse.
I don't mean much to no-one."


I  touched her face.
I told her.
We must ascend from the malingering hell.
Leave the one's who want you  begging for mercy.
In a shadow of our memories.


There is  no easy road.
Sometime we must get up.
Tell the world to back away.


Find a better path to be on.
Kinder people.


Torn Angel walk with me.
Take my hand.
The new day is rising from the East.




           Coyote
            Oct 2009

© 2012 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Sometime we need friendship to make us stronger. Kind words and people who don't look for weaknesses. Thank you for reading. Any errors. Please assist a old man.

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From the beginning to the end, this inspired me... We have times when we feel worthless, and when someone is there to hold our hand it helps ease the pain...the walk of life is so much better when we have someone kind enough to show they care. Lovely write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I took this journey with you by reading your words and making them part of me.

Thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have always conveyed immense empathy through your work love...this is sensational :) It sometimes only takes a few words or an offered hand to help others...whatever their flaws...we are all here on a journey, all equal!
No one is any better than anyone else at the end of the day in this scheme called life :) Outsanding piece hon xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good poem. I liked it much. Friendship is the only relation on the earth which will not be compared to anyone. OK.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this poem, very good read. It reminded me of a very special friend as soon as i started to read it xxx beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have yet ceased to impress my coyote. Very wise and all knowing. Friendship is sometimes stronger than any other bond. Love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really like this a lot. reminds me of me somehow. i dont like how you say there are no angels on earth, because i dont think thats true. however, i love this poem. wonderful job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Title is amazing 'Torn angel'

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Looooooove it!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

creates such inspiring imagery for me

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really insiring, thank you :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poet and writer who love to read and write. My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life. Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words. Remembe.. more..

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