Without You

Without You

A Poem by Lance
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it is a poem about how some people feel when somebody they care about leaves them.

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There are shadows on the earth.
There is darkness in my head.
There is sorrow in my hart.
There is pain in my mind.
The world is dark.

The blue sky's turned crimson.
The sea's of purity turned gray and bleak.
I feel like the world is a prison as darkness engulfs my day.

© 2010 Lance


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Lance
Please let me know how you think it is, and what i may need to work on.

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Hi i am lance u can call me castiel. I like to write poetry and i like to watch anime (yes i know strange combo lol) but it is who i am. i am a nice guy and a good friend. more..

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