Valentines Day Sucks

Valentines Day Sucks

A Poem by Carolann Dowsett

Valentines day sucks
come on you know it's true
When your siting alone at home
with nothing better to do

You see all the guys out there
buying flowers for their girl
And you wonder what became of love
why it isn't in your world

But then you realise it doesn't matter
that it doesn't mean a thing
All this fuss about one stupid day
and all the pain it brings

Living alone has it's benifits too
no hassles, heartache or pain
Nothing more left to lose
and the whole world left to gain

So don't be sad
if you're all alone
When Valentines Day comes
don't cry or moan

Cause one day love
will come your way
And you'll miss the freedom
of your single days

© 2014 Carolann Dowsett


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Did you read my mind or something?

I hate Valentine's Day too. Not because I'm single, but because of all the bullcrap hoopla that surrounds it.

For me it's Singles Awareness Day. I'm single, I'm aware of it, and I don't give a s**t.

And you're right. It IS safer to be alone. That's why I keep my heart locked in barbed wire and sealed behind a castle wall. Much better that way. Full points from me. Good job. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

4 Years Ago

Thank you Mr D 😊



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Valentine day. A good day for retail. Real love is shown daily. I believe only good reason for this day. Is the kids in school. Can send card of love without fear. Benefits of being marry and single. Easy to make one person content. Two content people can be difficult. Thank you sharing your poetry for the day of love.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote :)
Hahaha. I love Valentine's Day! ....it's a great opportunity to sell cupcakes, sugar cookies, cheesecakes, etc... lol.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

Oh I love that Gabrielle, awesome way to get something back from a stupid day :)
Lol...well you said it loud and clear. The fact is one day a year doesnt matter. Ive seen female friends receive flowers and jewelry on Valentines but in every day life the relationship sucks!! Extravagant gifts and flamboyant statements do not equate to a happy love life. Great view of the other side in this poem!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

Yes that's very true. Things are not away as they seem. :) thank you :)
most years i have not liked Valentines Day...i have had many that ended relationships...

bad things happened on that day, bad memories....but with good love comes a much better result...and it will come...

and i like your irony...when we have someone to share it with, we will long for the freedom...

good stuff here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob :)
I hate Valentines Day too. It's pointless.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

Thank you Kenneth :)
Ha ha ha this is one cool poetry.... Adored it my friend

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it :) thank you
True...and a good poem..agree with all the reviews

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie :)
Ha Carolann, I couldn't have said it better myself, love how you tell it like it is...it sure does blow if you have no one to share it with. I guess I won't dare say Happy Valentine's Day.... ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

Glad you liked it Frieda :) hope you have a good day
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

My pleasure, I'm leaving you some dark chocolate for the day, whether you want it or not ha ;-)
Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

Oh yum :) that's awesome
It is over commercial and over hyped for people in a couple and annoying if you are single, but love is worth celebrating all the same. Nice work loved this take on it



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

Thanks Leigh glad you enjoyed. :)
I found this amusing and true. Liked it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

10 Years Ago

Thanks I'm glad you liked it :)

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Carolann Dowsett
Carolann Dowsett

Copacabana, NSW, Australia



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