The Troubadour

The Troubadour

A Story by Catlen
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Dedicated to my mentor!

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His gentle eyes resembled the icy-blue Scandinavian Seas in colour.

She was lost in his ensnaring gaze, drowned into the powerful

maelstroms of knowledge and wisdom that pooled into his eyes.

 

His voice had an almost unearthly melodic cadence.

The troubadour was a master of verses,

casting a hypnotising spell upon her.

 

She was forever bewitched.

© 2013 Catlen


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Ah, passion! In this case, it seems to extend beyond mere written word.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Catlen

10 Years Ago

Thank you, sir!
I agree with Sharon... I see more going on with this story and, like the woman narrator, I am bewitched by it already!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Catlen

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Kleio13

10 Years Ago

Anytime. i love how the last line sums it all up
Mesmerizing! I would love to see this expanded into a longer story. Nicely done!. I love the powerful maelstroms of wisdom and knowledge that pooled in his eyes-fantastic image.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Catlen

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
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Sam
I love how you tell the story of the troubadour and of the one he is entertaining. I guess you can say for lack of better terms. I love the flow and in symbolism you use. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Catlen

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sam! :)))
Sam

10 Years Ago

Any time Cat :)

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Catlen
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My name is Catherine and I am from Greece. I am a teacher in reality and a romance writer in my dreams. I am also working as a freelance editor / proofreader. For more information, check my webs.. more..

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