DREAMS

"...As I’ve often said, my life, like any other, has been a cautionary tale of wasted chances, broken dreams, and stale promises, but I’ve also been blessed with knowing where I fit in The Plan. We come into the world alone and leave the same way. But if we’re very lucky, we have the chance to share ourselves, all of ourselves, in between with those we love..."

Reviews

[Shayla Sayer]

very touching!

[Brytt]

This is a nice poem: it's relatable, inspiring, and religious without being overbearing. I think you are being vague enought that anyone could relate to this poem, yet specific enough that readers feel linked to you. I like this peom, and can't wait for more.

Something that you should think about, though, is artistic spacing and stylistic appeal to our visual pallet. For example:
To be
Alone
is painful- humiliating-
almost
Unbearable.

Just a thought. Not necessary.

[dreaming dame]

BEAUTIFULL!!!! I love it, and agree. :)