Let's pretend

Let's pretend

A Poem by Centipedle

Blooming red leaves,
Over a brightly colored town.
I remember it like yesterday,
Orange coating the streets.
There were people playing music,
Passing out food.
A festival of autumn,
Fondly within my mind.

Branches free of leaves,
Over a white colored town.
I remember it like today,
Crystals in the streets.
People were bundled up,
Making soup for all around.
A festival of winter,
Where I met you.

© 2016 Centipedle

Author's Note


Sorry I haven't been on, life's gotten busy. I've been searching for a job and working on my mental health I suppose.

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Beautifully structured. I like the contrast between the two stanzas. The brightly colored town and then the white town in the second stanza.
It is a festival all around.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I really like the parallel structure between the first and second stanzas. The color imagery is beautiful, as are the descriptions of the townspeople. This is a very sweet, happy poem. It made me smile. Nicely done!

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such beautiful work frnd, I must say some lines that you have used here are superb giving a feeling of a festival occurring in that moment... There is a touch of sweetness in it with heartfelt memories... Loved it...


Posted 7 Years Ago

I like it! It speaks of fun and happy occasions, combined with a possible meeting with someone you love. The simplicity and depth are amazing. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing use of words. The words dance with positive energy and took the reader to better places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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15 Reviews
Added on June 3, 2016
Last Updated on June 3, 2016



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