A Poem by Centipedle

I hear your words dripping off your tongue.
Stealing my thoughts and shutting them down.
All I want is for you to leave.
So I can stop feeling this grieve.

© 2017 Centipedle

Author's Note

A quick anxiety relief poem

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Honest and direct words shared my friend. You did well. Nice flow of thoughts led to strong ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Simply written and with much emotion.

Posted 3 Years Ago

I can visualize this running thru a person's head when feeling stressed out, but not wanting to say it outloud . . . capturing it in a poem is a creative stress-relief! I don't believe rhymes have to be exact, so maybe "grief" as the last word would lend more to the meaning, while still maintaining a near-rhyme?!?!? Just a thought . . .

Posted 3 Years Ago

I'm not to keen on how the final word has been employed in it's present form Centipedle - it kind of trips me up.
Overall though, it's a great wee scream of a poem. I hope it helped.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on March 31, 2017
Last Updated on March 31, 2017



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