Air

Air

A Poem by Centipedle

I breathed in air.
Only to find myself choking on it.

I tried to expel it out.
But it sank even further in.

© 2017 Centipedle


Author's Note

Centipedle
I was going to make it longer, but this seemed.... simple - to the point.

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Bad air is hard release. You made your point in the poetry. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Great work. This makes me feel as if the writer is feeling out of place and sad about it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


nice work, i prefer much to replace even in the last line. simple but sweet.

Posted 4 Years Ago


GO SEE A DOCTOR!!!!!, jkjk anyways nice piecec:

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I guess, whether we like it or not, some things will affect us deeply, if we even take precautions. Like love. We can try to keep it out but...

I was not sure of this until the third or fourth reading. After a few deep breaths ...lol

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Beware of the company you keep
Not only dirt can pollute the air

its when you can't breathe in
you know someone rotten is around

really well done !!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Centipedle
Centipedle

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