Sometimes and everytime

Sometimes and everytime

A Poem by Hazle Eyed Girl
"

your life cannot be fulfilled without that person who completes you, even if they just don't give a damn.

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sometimes i have to share what i am thinking out loud

every-time your always there to listen

sometimes i don't want to be alone

every time you are there to fill the shadows

 

sometimes i miss you

even when you here right next to me

sometimes i find you to be so intriguing

when you talk about the things that i don't know about

 

sometimes i am acting the b***h and being moody

every-time you look at me and ask me to calm down

sometimes i wish you weren't so far away

every-time you act as if it doesn't matter.


sometimes i think you still care

most of the time you prove me wrong

© 2011 Hazle Eyed Girl


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A great piece, you have verbally captured the misery we experience in life to just have someone there to validate our feelings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write. But I think you should tweak the last two lines, as they didnt make a whole lot of sense to me. Otherwise, a great heartfelt piece.

~anna rose

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Critically thought.. Though understandable but still perplexing! Good luck

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 18, 2011
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D. L. Knight is a sixteen year old young adult who has been creating stories since she was little. Whither with words or with a form of art. She is rather hyperactive and she considers herself to .. more..

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