Sometimes and everytime

your life cannot be fulfilled without that person who completes you, even if they just don't give a damn.

sometimes i have to share what i am thinking out loud

every-time your always there to listen

sometimes i don't want to be alone

every time you are there to fill the shadows

 

sometimes i miss you

even when you here right next to me

sometimes i find you to be so intriguing

when you talk about the things that i don't know about

 

sometimes i am acting the b***h and being moody

every-time you look at me and ask me to calm down

sometimes i wish you weren't so far away

every-time you act as if it doesn't matter.

sometimes i think you still care

most of the time you prove me wrong

Reviews

[Crow]

A great piece, you have verbally captured the misery we experience in life to just have someone there to validate our feelings.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Great write. But I think you should tweak the last two lines, as they didnt make a whole lot of sense to me. Otherwise, a great heartfelt piece.

~anna rose

[nishalization]

Critically thought.. Though understandable but still perplexing! Good luck