You Never Knew Me

You Never Knew Me

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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With my heart in your hands.........

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I truly thought
I had found myself
in a wondrous place
where you could truly see me,
and that all my words
were forever immortalized.
Held close.......
inside of your everything,
soft......as a breeze.

I laughed as you stared
into my eyes, asking my name.
With my heart in your hands
and the moonlight
at your beck and call.
Then......watching you walk away,
I smiled.......
even though I realized
you never knew me
at all.

© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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like love at first sight so to speak falling for someone on sight as you first speak to them in a state of lost for love snapping back to reality seeing the things between you such as love and time shared was only a sense of inner thinking in ones self for he don't even know you to love you. as always keep writing fellow writer

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you Kelvin :)
kelvin

11 Years Ago

You're welcome



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genuinely wonderful...

Posted 12 Years Ago


as your friend , my heart aches for where you write from..Laury

Posted 12 Years Ago


as your friend , my heart aches for where you write from..Laury

Posted 12 Years Ago


A hart-felt poem, so gentle but packs a punch when you get to the end, brilliant job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thats down right sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i already wrote one review and it "buffered" for 5 minutes then disappeared, God only knows where those go....anyway, as i was saying, i have been there ...walking away with my heart in your hands. where you get your words is an amazing place. but you seem to flow right from your heart on many of the poems you write, and the words always find a way into mine. i love your romance poetry. it is the stuff of dreams and fantasy. thank you for asking me to read this. beautiful write!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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