Skating to the Stars

Skating to the Stars

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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When one skates to the stars with feet called to wait on the sunrise............

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When one skates to the stars
with feet called to wait on the sunrise,
it is said their hearts are hungry
for the dreams full of love
to return again.  
The taste of this hunger
travels with them
into the darkness full of stars
and stirs every sunset
they see
in their domain.

Sometimes this makes one feel
like running away
to erase the past and all pleasures
which made them feel complete
each and every morning.
Still, they know,
love will continue as part of those dreams.
So they skate
to the stars,
to see
what a new sunset
brings.

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Just wanted to write something new to bring the new year in.

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I do love the connection in this, as you make visual the universe, and bond it to love.
That is very special. I find it very zen too, as days and nights, return, and all in the universe turns around, and around for ages.... it's a perfect life's pattern, and you penned it so wonderous. Thank you sweet soul sister.

E.L.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

9 Years Ago

thank you sweet sister :)

9 Years Ago

This was a soulful and beautiful write, thank YOU dear x



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and now that the new year is half over, what has it brought? Lovely images in this one. I love the sky, and the stars. But I guess everyone with a heart does.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This image captures my imagination and your words send me to the realm where possibilities lay, a place where goodness and mercy live. Another lovely piece on page with beautiful sentiment.
" So they skate
to the stars,
to see
what a new sunset
brings."


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Veronica :)
we all need impossible dreams...skating to the stars is such a wonderful phrase..but then you knew that

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Dr. Wood :)
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I love this, such wodnerful way to describe hope.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Bobbie :)
I love the gliding of the skates to the stars:) Positive message with beautiful images. Nice job Neva!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

9 Years Ago

Thank you, good to see you again.
The Analog Kid

9 Years Ago

Thanks:)
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Pax
i find the message full of hope and positivism... we all need a break and skating in the stars seems to be the best there is...
Well done my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

9 Years Ago

Thank you Pax :)
Would be nice to skate to the stars. I like the artwork and description. When I was young. We support to have a Utopia type world. Where music, hope and dreams were more important then work. Didn't happen. I like goal and purpose of the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote :)
Beautiful, this was a lovely piece. It took me on a journey this morning as I stared at the sliver of moon with Venus shining brightly to its right. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jack :)
beautiful...I apologize for lack of words. I have none to give. You have taken them...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

9 Years Ago


Thank you P. :)
I read this again. I'm skating too!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

9 Years Ago

awesome!
Levi Levin

9 Years Ago

:)

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Added on January 1, 2013
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Tags: stars, skate, sun, feet, love, dreams

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