Breath of a Rose - Spokenword Video

Breath of a Rose - Spokenword Video

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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A new spokenword poetry video

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Is there no breath in a glowing roses dream
After the night has scattered
None so fair warms a heart it seems
Or equals a breath
That matters

When the night is over in a golden sense
Climbing up above the sea
Would you care or take offense
If a dreaming rose
Could no longer breathe

What follows until the last light shines
Within all your memories
Inside small spaces are you so inclined
To be the dreaming rose
That still breathes

Do you dream willingly, continuing to bloom
After the night has scattered
As you take each breath do you presume
That which warms your heart
To be what matters

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Excellent voice and intonation. I have mentioned your accent before; it certainly lends a lot to the meaningful message of the poem.
I think we should all try this spokenvideo format.
A lovely poem. One to come back to. Right now it is my bedtime, so I am going to make this my last and take the sound and words of the poem to my slumber.
Night. Night, Neva Flores. And thanks.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Cartera :) I am so glad you enjoyed it :)



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Lovely, wanted to hear another spoken word artist. Truly enjoyed this. It reveals the inner gentleness of a life at peace. Continuing to bloom through time and of golden pond, that wades in the water.

Posted 7 Years Ago


stunning imagery, I could visualise the rose breathing as I read through the poem, and smell it's gentle soothing scent

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Sheema :)
Excellent voice and intonation. I have mentioned your accent before; it certainly lends a lot to the meaningful message of the poem.
I think we should all try this spokenvideo format.
A lovely poem. One to come back to. Right now it is my bedtime, so I am going to make this my last and take the sound and words of the poem to my slumber.
Night. Night, Neva Flores. And thanks.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Cartera :) I am so glad you enjoyed it :)
Very soft to the ear. Ambitious yet it feels good. Great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) X
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Pax
finally i was able to listen to your breath-taking audio my friend... a warm warm piece... brings a lot of emotions...awesome!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Pax :)
Oh my goodness Neva, your work has this ability to transport and lift my spirit. This is I believe, my first opportunity to hear the spoken poetry, it adds an inexplicable dimension of light and life and well almost mysticism which I find simply lovely. The artwork included is so beautifully misty and it augments your words and voice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Veronica :)
Veronica Chandler

8 Years Ago

:-)
Lovely poem. I was reading it more slowly and softly but I always enjoy hearing a southern voice.....it makes me feel at home. Indeed it is that which warms our hearts that matters.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Fabian :)
This is a deep thought put so beautifully using the image of a rose.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Poetic Beauty :)
This was amazing! You have wonderful writes and this is another fantastic one! Your words flow perfectly, beautiful imagery. Its perfect!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Noodlehead :)
Good to hear your voice. Always a honor to hear the Poet. Thank you for the verbal and written poetry. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

8 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote :)

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Added on March 4, 2013
Last Updated on March 4, 2013
Tags: spokenword, video, poetry

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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