Gate's Of The Spirit

Gate's Of The Spirit

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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A perfect silence turned time backwards.........

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I heard thunder rumble from the edge of the dark horizon
While in the distance lightening flared
Then a perfect silence turned time backwards
As I breathed in the sweetest air

Such unexplained feelings for which I have no words
Suddenly echoed through my locked in heart
A longing for something that left me defenseless
With absolutely no route of escape to embark

An uncontrolled fire emerged as if from my fingertips
Leaving my spirit open with no place to hide
Yearning for a satisfaction I have never known
While melting away all of my pride

A love as pure as untouched spring water
Mysteriously and deeply ruled by the fates
Had broken the chains wound around my heart
And flooded into my spirit's own gates

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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I like the fire that exposes the spirit leaving no place to hide for there is no darkness, no secrets and we are forced to face ourselves. In that is freedom like no other. Once exposed we can be who we really are without fear or hiding. Thus the power of love, loving and being loved. Great write.

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Yes only Love can break the chains around the heart. But who chained it in first place?

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Very nice very deep within the poets soul

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Once again you deliver :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mesmerizing...your skills are impressive, you have a beautifully creative mind! It's A joy to read your work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Nice job. Passion is a flame, is it not?

Posted 10 Years Ago


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inspirational piece Neva...the spirit at times can be shadowed into a cage and then with the unexplained it is freed into the reality...we are spiritual beings within a realm of physical capabilities grasping the wisdom to become liberated Souls...an exceptional expression of thought...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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so mysterious and beautiful; something so intangible but we feel its pull...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the fire that exposes the spirit leaving no place to hide for there is no darkness, no secrets and we are forced to face ourselves. In that is freedom like no other. Once exposed we can be who we really are without fear or hiding. Thus the power of love, loving and being loved. Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 25, 2010
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Tags: thunder, fire, fingertips, chains, spirit

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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