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Promises made beneath the moonlight amass in unison
To sing their entrancing song to the stars
Intoxicating lyrics so sweetly sung in harmony
Persuades the most radiant one to brightly beam from afar

Such alluring suggestions ring throughout each stanza
Compelling the brightest star to outshine
Each of its bright companions with its luminous light
As its own shining radiance, it refines

Reaching out into the heavens, the star beams with delight
Burning with all the essence it holds inside
Awaiting all the promises made beneath the moonlight
Anxiously hoping that its light does not subside

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Wow...I'm looking for something to critique here and I'm
disappointed..Simply Flawless..

[Marlena]

I think of angels when I read this, or like...the North Star, you know? I loooved the line, "Intoxicating lyrics so sweetly sung in harmony persuades the most radiant one to brightly beam from afar." Such a pretty poem. Good work :)