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Promises made beneath the moonlight amass in unison..........

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Promises made beneath the moonlight amass in unison
To sing their entrancing song to the stars
Intoxicating lyrics so sweetly sung in harmony
Persuades the most radiant one to brightly beam from afar

Such alluring suggestions ring throughout each stanza
Compelling the brightest star to outshine
Each of its bright companions with its luminous light
As its own shining radiance, it refines

Reaching out into the heavens, the star beams with delight
Burning with all the essence it holds inside
Awaiting all the promises made beneath the moonlight
Anxiously hoping that its light does not subside


© 2010 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Wow...I'm looking for something to critique here and I'm
disappointed..Simply Flawless..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think of angels when I read this, or like...the North Star, you know? I loooved the line, "Intoxicating lyrics so sweetly sung in harmony persuades the most radiant one to brightly beam from afar." Such a pretty poem. Good work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 26, 2010
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Tags: promise, moonlight, song, star

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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