Breathe

Breathe

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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The power of the eyes...............

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Brilliant energy flows from the depths of your eyes
Striking deep chords in my soul
Radiating a sapphire glow which possesses my own
Altering my strength and control

A mesmerizing moment of time stopped in place
Takes hold, as I look deep inside
Your bottomless sea of sapphire delight
Slipping under the skin of my pride

Such shimmering echoes of primitive desire
Waves of crashing release
Captivate my soul when I look in your eyes
As they steal my breath from me

Your sapphire glow has taken control of my soul
As I swim in your bottomless sea
I have no need to rise to the surface for air
As your energy breathes life into me



© 2010 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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First I am happy that this happens to women to too. I do know the power of eyes, that first eye contact and you fill it riveting through your body like waves of water. It is much like the picture you used in this poem, you feel surrounded and like your floating away within there eyes. I can truly relate to this poem, excellent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It's kind of odd that blue and green eyes provoke the most in people. I guess this is because their colour can be related to so many wondrous things. Brown eyes remind people of dirt and that's where the love stops :(

Oh what I'd give for blue/green eyes! - lol

Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful poem as the others have already commented. I enjoyed particularly the last stanza and the impacting imagery you used where you say: "As I swim in your bottomless sea; I have no need to rise to the surface for air; As your energy breathes life into me." I am curious about the only punctuation you have for the whole poem, in the second stanza: the comma. Could you share a little on that? Thanks for sharing. Keep writing, please.
Gionelly*KiSS

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

an excellent work of expressing that view into the windows of the soul...poetry goes so well with expressions of thought such as these...

nice...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I believe there are eyes that steal your soul...black magic...Dhaka kaa jadoo.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is...... I can't describe it. It is one heck of a write and this is true talent. I hope you apreciate this write and keep on doing what your doing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

They say "the eyes are windows into the soul".
I, for one, am obbsessed with eyes and it is the first thing I notice about someone. Love this poem, it's breathtaking. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First I am happy that this happens to women to too. I do know the power of eyes, that first eye contact and you fill it riveting through your body like waves of water. It is much like the picture you used in this poem, you feel surrounded and like your floating away within there eyes. I can truly relate to this poem, excellent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

O yes! this is a keeper! Outstanding and Sensually Charged.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

breathtaking. this is exquisitely romantic. To what depth do the pools of the eyes take us? great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 2, 2010
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Tags: eyes, soul, sea, bottomless, control

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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