Flawless Stream of Whispers

Your flawless stream of whispers is now shedding tears...........

Your flawless streams of whispers are now shedding tears
Where will they look now when all is loosened
Quite forgotten are the memories that have scarred
This heart can no longer feel them
They are translucent

The dripping sound of pain is no longer heard here in the now
Only lovely music breaks from the soul within
Where will your whispers watch their flawless flow
When the tongue that leads their voice
Is never heard again

I hope that as you leave you will feel the pain you stream
It will haunt every corner your life meets
Then perhaps one day neither of us will remember
Your flawless streams of whispers
Or their deceit

Your flawless streams of whispers are now shedding tears
That can be washed away in the tide of change
Quite forgotten will be the memories and all the scars
As our hearts will no longer feel them
Nor will we be estranged

Reviews

[Forest Green]

Lessening the pain of disappointment and heartbreak; sometimes it seems there is little we can do. Yet the tide of life, of time, works away even the most fossilized emotions...one way or the other they will grow faint.

Very nice metaphor...an genuine, poetic effort.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

flawless stream of whispers... what a eery yet beautiful way to describe it... yet another heartfelt touching poem... amazing work!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Those whispers we listen to, sometimes there comes a time we rarely here them anymore.
Beautifully written my friend.

[CalebSchadeck]

very interesting piece loved the vivid descriptions, although it could flow a little better all in all very well written, nice job!