Unknown Sand Runs Ashamed in Paradise

Unknown Sand Runs Ashamed in Paradise

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm






































Do you remember when our days passed into invisible nights

Where time made no sense as it vanished to shade
Some say the moon tells us where our sun hides in heaven
‘Cause when darkness gathers over fields you see
Glistening dewdrops at play

We hold our breath because a moment remains at midnight
Charming us while pretending to be in a gentle trance
Until what we thought could not possibly exist anymore
Climbs upon our knee to brush our cheek
In a dream filled glance

Stretched out we feel time looks at us as if he were saying
Unknown sand now runs ashamed in our paradise
In those seconds we hide away from the sweetest voice
That can be heard from our whispering moon
Passed into invisible nights

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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I always feel like our writing compements one anothers so well. I do remember "when our days passed into invisible nights". Thats whats so beautiful about your poetry, it's spoken from your soul, yet you take it to a place where everyone can relate. Everything you do is amazing!

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Your poems are always deep and meaningful. Good job!

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It’s amazing how a combination of words can bring out the art form of poetry.
Great job, well done.


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beautiful picture & poem!

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all i want to say is "wow"..but i guess i have already said that..so i'm gonna look for your book instead ;)

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This one reminds me of Schrödinger's cat :o) I like it!

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impressive title, beautiful picture, captivating poem! beautiful all in all

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Love the picture. Time often doesn't make sense and passes us by with a great speed. Great poem.

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Oh how wonderful and wicked both time can be.. I love your imagery here, Neva. Another excellent tantilizing display of your beauty in words.

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Clearly, the challenge for you, Neva, would be to write a lousy poem. You certainly haven't done it here.
Another classic.

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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