Because

Because

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Beneath a sea which keeps the names of all that whirl in grace...........

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Beneath a sea which keeps the names of all that whirl in grace
Far from the pages between your face and mine
Not because I came near to this place
Do I tremble at the beauty
Here I find


On the one hand the looks of lovers call to me in fragrant rains
Whispering from a melodious harp with no strings
On the other hand, I see you in everything
And I tremble at the beauty
Which you bring


Not because of lovely flowers that float gently on the winds
Falling as the sweetest sight to joyful tears
I tremble as I watch each petal descend
Filled with beauty so like you
Yet unaware

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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I just read about particle entanglement as it refers to quantum physics today. It taught me that everything in the universe is connected by an unknown force. If you do something to one photon that is entangled with another far across the universe they react in the exact same way at the exact same time. This poem says the same to me and easier to read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I like the effort you put into this poem. It just seems forced to me, and it reads like a run on sentence. It's not bad but it isn't great either.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

why would you take the time to go to something old of mine just to make a comment like this? I do b.. read more
Ah, so elegantly stated typical of the Ms. Flores we have come to know and enjoy.
thanks for sharing this sweet flow of your words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a a graceful poem and flows as yo uread along.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel like our mutual muse is whispering again. Lovely, like everything you do!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish I knew your secret my friend, your poetry flows from within you and is more beautiful each time.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved this poem Neva. My favorite stanza would have to be the second where the imagry in it was amazing to me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing imagery. You have such a way with words...
Wow

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

because - the answer that really needs no further definiton other than it just is

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very beautiful...'I tremble as I watch each petal descend..Filled with beauty so like you...Yet unaware' simply exquisite writing...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this. My favorite line: On the one hand the looks of lovers call to me in fragrant rains
Whispering from a melodious harp with no strings

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: sea, grace, rain, wind, harp

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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