Tiny Moments

Tiny Moments

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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For Tate Morgan..........one that rhymes...........

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Through rain that sounds on hills of tiny moments
Somewhere beneath a faithful plea
We act out in the deepest shades of gray
As intellects passing in cascades
Of sailing ecstasy

Poets reflecting secret words which breathe in joy
Hiding our thoughts in perfect prose
Until the heavens embrace our smiling sun
And we speak in tongues
That we chose

With full cups of dreams from our imaginations
Step by step we advance on shores
Until all your thoughts rhyme in emotions
And all those tiny moments
Become yours

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Some love the rhymes, some don't...........:)

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Sometimes the words are a perfect ryhme and sometimes the words are just a barely labouring stuttering prose.... But each word is perfect that comes before or after.... it depends how the author chose...

This flows like a silken waterfall over rocks smoothed by time...

I love it! You rock! Even while you roll ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Wow!! a splendid write this. Enjoyed reading

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The past few months have been tumultuous and life-changing for me; it is only now that I logged in again and this is the first poem i read in months...
Your poem is lovely, superb, amazing, beautiful --- neither of those words could compare to the feelings your poem sparked in me. I can only describe it as a calm touch that soothes my unbalanced mind and weary heart.

Thank you so much, your poem reminded me of my love for writing...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Normally most of the poems I read make me think of metal, rock, or classic hard rock when i read them. This poem, this one makes me think of Carlie Simon, not too sure why but that is the read I get from it. Maybe Clint Black, but this reads like a balled, which only works for metal when the poems are slightly sad or brutal in retrospect. Nice job, good read, would sound will with a piano in the background late evening, possible light rain outside.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Neva, this is a precious rhyme my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Poetry is different things to different people. Very lovely piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love it, every moment =) Such a precious feeling!! haha

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love rhymes!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry, it's a powerful thing, I just strated about six months ago and I can see how powerful it is. It can make you cry, or make you smile, gasp, or even not be able to breath. It makes me even want to learn more. Like any poet the feeling of wicking out a epic ryhem and poem provide a great sense of pride and adrinline. Makes me think of lose yourself by Eminem "you better lose yourself in the moment, you own it you better never let it go, this oppertunity comes once in a lifetime" Good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Through rain that sounds on hills of tiny moments
so uniquely suggestive

Until all your thoughts rhyme in emotions
And all those tiny moments
Become yours

the essence of poetry for me

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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