Breathe Upon These Miles

Softly breathe upon these miles between you and I
Where they will not continue to seem so far
Let them fall by the wayside
So that I am able to look into your eyes
No matter where we are

I cannot help but wish to be cradled in your hours
To be ever listening to your heartbeat
A sound quieting my own
Filling my world with precious showers
'Tis when I feel complete

Until the moment comes when you softly breathe
Upon these miles between you and me
Here I will be, by the wayside
Until your breath shows the way that leads
To erase all these miles I see

Softly breathe upon these miles between you and I
Until they no longer continue to exist
Let them fall by the wayside
So that I am able to look into your eyes
And be cradled in your kiss

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I can't wait to show my dearest friend this poem.. Miles separate us and yet I feel like we've been the dearest of friends for a lifetime.. You again have penned this longing, want and need for the distance to vanish..into each others embrace:) xx Love it..x

[DfWigley]

Lovely words Neva, keep them coming.;)

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Another diamond of poetry that sparkles.

[Not Available]

Beautiful and heartfelt. Its as if I'm in this poem. These are my favorite lines: Love it♥
I cannot help but wish to be cradled in your hours
To be ever listening to your heartbeat
A sound quieting my own
Filling my world with precious showers
'Tis when I feel complete

Until the moment comes when you softly breathe
Upon these miles between you and me
Here I will be, by the wayside
Until your breath shows the way that leads
To erase all these miles I see

[Judy Ponceby]

Neva, this is fabulous. The longing and desire show so plainly in the gentle words "Softly breathe upon these miles between you and I" Beautiful.

[Winslow Des Totes]

Oops, forgot to rate. :D Gotcha though ;)

[Winslow Des Totes]

This is very sweet, almost delicate. :) Beautiful write with great use of romantic similes. :D:D:D Terrific job!

[Sylo's Rose]

very creative. i like it. It was very passionet. (Im not sure i spelt that right)

[Joiedevivre]

Beautiful, soulful poem. This could also be a song. I can hear it!

[WynterPhoenix]

Beautiful =]

[Pollyanna]

This is a perfect sentiment for a lover, friend or even family. Absolutely beautiful!