Dreams of Unknown Melodies

Dreams of unknown melodies become my companions
When the moon sits upon her throne, my love
Far away, more gravitating
Are the quivering stars in the heavens
Up above

My life floats within the sun in a blissful perfect peace
Blazing there, high above the tallest trees
In lines, my soul can name
Running ceaseless and as fair as fair
Can be

Within all the perfect strength I find from these two
There lies this land, where breezes blow
To chase away the fog
That softly creeps across my heart
With woe

The cares of life are swept away in unknown melodies
Into that place known as wilderness, of sound
My eyes are turned to touch
Upon their ancient realms of hope
Once again……….
My world is spinning round

Author's Note

Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

Oh my goodness, I glanced at the stats on this piece and see a number which surprises. I guess by the number, 1046 views, I am not your only big fan. I am as amazed at the number as I am at how you are able to capture light and mist and the realms of hope. With the words, "My life floats within the sun in a blissful perfect peace Blazing there, high above the tallest trees", I find myself looking up to warm my face seeking peace in the tallest trees.
Beautiful write.

[anonymous]

"The cares of life are swept away in unknown melodies
Into that place known as wilderness, of sound
My eyes are turned to touch
Upon their ancient realms of hope
Once again……….
My world is spinning round"

This poem is amazingly beautiful! I really liked the way you worded everything and how it all flowed so well.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Mind blowing..... a very powerful message is conveyed

[AWSklavos]

Very nicely done. I like how you have captured the mood. Thank you for sharing.

[Breathetheair]

Yes. I am an instant fan!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you :)

[Benyoucef]

That's what I've been looking for since I signed up, nice job

[Garfield Rupe]

This poem is simply beautiful!

I really like the fourth stanza:

The cares of life are swept away in unknown melodies
Into that place known as wilderness, of sound
My eyes are turned to touch
Upon their ancient realms of hope
Once again.......
My world is spinning round.

[Adam M. Snow]

This is beautiful

[WatashLegend]

the tune in this poem brings about curiosity as the melody makes one sway to and fro, the depths of the unknown is always quite the journey.

[cat13]

A beautiful poem. Really beautiful