Running Wild

Running Wild

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Although my footsteps were soft and sweet, the earth still saw my soul............

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I gathered waves of laughter and began to run wild

With horses who came to see the sun
Although my footsteps were soft and sweet
The earth still saw my soul
Started spinning wild
  Gathering waves of laughter
Along with me

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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This is the shortist poem i have ever read of yours Neva, but it still holds the magic within its frame ...... brilliant my friend x x sorry not been about much getting used to new job and been searching for resourses to help me do a better job ... but i love it and im happy x

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First time I see such a short poem from you. Generally you write at least four stanzas. It is short but meaningful and tells the whole story better. I like your style here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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A short and sweet poem. The imagery and bright wording made it something to devour slowly. Amazing job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Really like the image I have in my head right now after reading your peom. Really well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Such a small amount of words, but great all the same. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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oh I love this...it feels like freedom...alive and living...this was fantastic work...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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We've seen dogs, horses and other animals run, jump and frolic about, just insanely happy to feel their muscles and bones moving inside their skin, to be alive, and it's such a positive, uplifting thing to see. To me, that is what you've described here. When you think about it, people can do this too.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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A fun and lighthearted piece. Very nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Really like the image of the world laughing along with your high-spirited romp. Enjoyed this light-hearted short, Neva.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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this is very nice i love the way you said with horses who came to see the sun and although my footsteps were soft and sweet the earth stil saw my soul. it's like your sayin the horses them selves loked into your soul and told the tale you did not know was there

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Nice, quiet short though it is interesting and thoughtful write.

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Added on May 16, 2011
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Tags: laughter, horses, sun, earth

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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