Running Wild

I gathered waves of laughter and began to run wild
With horses who came to see the sun
Although my footsteps were soft and sweet
The earth still saw my soul
Started spinning wild
  Gathering waves of laughter
Along with me

Reviews

[Pebbles]

This is the shortist poem i have ever read of yours Neva, but it still holds the magic within its frame ...... brilliant my friend x x sorry not been about much getting used to new job and been searching for resourses to help me do a better job ... but i love it and im happy x

[VelvetRosetta]

Awesome , love this type of writing, with few words you speak wonders!

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says alot with just a few short words, Very nicely done!

[Aidz]

at least they wernt unicorns... damm the unicorns

Short sweet n kewl

[emmajoy]

Though short you move with soft sweet steps into such powerful happiness .. there's a feeling of 'don't stop me now .. i'm alive and loving every minute'!

Love it!

[fireblossom]

A burst of poetic passion. Nice.

[roy mccarthy]

short and sweet neva!
a good inspiring poem!
unusually shorter than your other work!
just as awesome :)

[Sourav]

It gives a vibe of energy and enthusiasm. A good short poem.

[Skateprincess]

What a wonderful and beautiful piece. Good job

[Art]

we are one with the Earth...nice touch to this short and yet expressive poem Neva...

[Michael X]

You always present a beautiful and natural flow that isn divine, I loved this and the place you take the reader.