I Am the Next Full Moon - The Chosen

I Am the Next Full Moon - The Chosen

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I am the next full moon and I have chosen you....................

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I am the next full moon and I have chosen you

To dwell on high with me
While all the world sighs below our view
The atmosphere will glow in kind
When our faces here
It sees

The earth will sleep leaving all in our care
While we count slowly to ten
Laughing as clouds pass by in our air
Seeking to hide our eternal glow
Chased over rambling hills
By a fickle wind

You are the next new star in heaven’s skies
I have now chosen you
To be the foundation on which I glide
I will wrap you in silver feelings
Until you become the sun
And say adieu

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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This has to be my favorite because I love the moon.. We are in a Full moon phase right now.. I always lay in bed with the curtains open and hope it's light fills me up for one more month.. :) This blends the energy of the night with day perfectly.. xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


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"You are the next new star in heaven’s skies
I have now chosen you
To be the foundation on which I glide
I will wrap you in silver feelings
Until you become the sun
And say adieu"

That's my favorite! This is so romantic, and has an excellent ending. It's so smooth and alluring. Great poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a romantic poem. To me a sweet kiss shared under the moonlight is ridiculously romantic. Neva, I truly loved this...and you continue to stun me by your talent!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful as I look out my window and watch the moon above me cross over and hide behind a rain cloud...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stunning and breathtakingly beautiful. i love anything about the moon, so you have touched my soul. perfect resonance and form, delivered flawlessly and with great imagery. brilliant write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva your writing always touches my soul. so filled with great imagery and tremendous emtion.xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Beautiful, but can I get a one way ticket to the stars also? lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So pretty :) Another wonderful flowing piece of enchantment

Posted 12 Years Ago


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There are so many visual delights from which to choose in this inspired work, but if asked to pick a favorite, it would have to be from the vantage point of my friend, the moonlight:

"I will wrap you in silver feelings
Until you become the sun"

You have penned many beautiful poems, I have read some that touch deep, though I have read only a few, but this sings strong and holds me rapt perhaps more than any other. "Moonlight becomes you."

Spellbinding, Neva.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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One of my all time favorites of yours, there are quite a few now! A classically written piece full of great imagery, well done, great read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just fabulous.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on May 17, 2011
Last Updated on May 17, 2011
Tags: moon, sun, earth, heaven, skies, stars

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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