I Am the Next Full Moon - The Chosen

I am the next full moon and I have chosen you
To dwell on high with me
While all the world sighs below our view
The atmosphere will glow in kind
When our faces here
It sees

The earth will sleep leaving all in our care
While we count slowly to ten
Laughing as clouds pass by in our air
Seeking to hide our eternal glow
Chased over rambling hills
By a fickle wind

You are the next new star in heaven’s skies
I have now chosen you
To be the foundation on which I glide
I will wrap you in silver feelings
Until you become the sun
And say adieu

Author's Note

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

This has to be my favorite because I love the moon.. We are in a Full moon phase right now.. I always lay in bed with the curtains open and hope it's light fills me up for one more month.. :) This blends the energy of the night with day perfectly.. xx

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Such a dreamy atmosphere, concluding into a goodnights sleep with popping dreams... beautiful imagery and picture painted here... I do not enjoy the moons beauty enough..but this will change it.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a beautiful poem...
Nature and love go hand in hand.

[lorilynn]

wow, love this one. i love it, using images to write the piece. i can relate to doing that.

[Ladysue]

these lines are extraordinarily beautiful...I gasped when I read them...

'I will wrap you in silver feelings
Until you become the sun
And say adieu'

the title is wonderful, a pleasure to read...outstanding imagery...

[brenda]

it was a lovely poem and it had a lovely ending!:)

[joshua deathdealer]

I love poems inspired by the moon and this one has such a positive and uplifting feel to it, a refreshing break from the horror poetry I usually read and write. "I will wrap you in silver feelings" ( :

[Veronica Chandler]

This one is so lovely, and timely for me since the full moon is up now and in Scorpio! The closing line, "I will wrap you in silver feelings Until you become the sun And say adieu" really tugged at my heart and spoke to me inexplicably. Tender, beautiful, soft and playful at the same time. I love this piece.

[VelvetRosetta]

The moon, always seems to give a sweet ambiance to any writing, but yours are always filled with heart...that is what makes your poetry so beautiful!

[Ruth]

Serious kudos love! Stunning use of universal elements.....as always you immerse them with emotions...I am always left in awe - reading your work is a blessing xx

[Dream Weaver]

A beautiful flow with a light airy feeling of
hope and imagination Neva, loved it :) xo