When Life Began to Dance

When Life Began to Dance

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune................

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When life began to dance and tell the names of me and you

Heaven was met at the threshold of blessings
A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune that was given
On the beautiful eve of our love’s confession

A seed began growing as a reminder of passion’s flame
Thankful incense smiled, quietly burned
Our line of sight passed into a mist filled with love
Few have ever felt, but for, deeply yearn

Into the air shapes of thought became as tender voices
Deeply settling into our hearts forevermore
They whispered into the dance of life with a pleasure
That sweetly opened the reasons we are for

Whirls of wonder welcomed a constant round of forever
The stars knew our hands must be joined
And we were led to sing the verses of a lovely song
A melody, only heaven could have coined

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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A romantic and passionate piece.
"A waterfall of souls beat an eternal tune that was given
On the beautiful eve of our love’s confession"
I really liked the sing-song type of feel it gave and the soothe flow. The title says it all. Amazing write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Exquisitely written piece Neva. Your a true bleeding heart romantic


Posted 7 Years Ago


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A bleeding heart romantic after all... Very elegantly written

Posted 7 Years Ago


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So fantastical... :) this is a great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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"The stars knew our hands must be joined" the perfect symbol of a destined love. "Few have ever felt, but for, deeply yearn" the words that describe an emotion we all have felt and feel, a desire for something more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intense beauty eases from this writing! Lovley Neva!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is lovely - wow! I'd love to ever be the recipient of a poem like this - just sublime!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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i love this, sensual and romantic..ever since i came here i am indulging myself into sultry poetry...anotehr amazing piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Surf that spiral! I love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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If heaven ever learned to love from a poem it was this poem here that it learned from, great write

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This reminds me of a biblical love poem. Great work indeed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on June 4, 2011
Last Updated on June 15, 2011
Tags: life, love, dance, passion, poetry

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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