Tasting Peace as Flowers

Tasting Peace as Flowers

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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In hope tomorrow's arms will be a saving reservoir.................

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Surely now the clouds are reaching up to angelic prayers
For an alibi that will return their peaceful grace
In hope tomorrow's arms will be a saving reservoir 
To reverse all the battles fought in this place

The layers of heaven remember echoes of glorious love
In streaming colors which cannot be erased
Even as clouds were weeping with every heartbeat
For precious moments not to be replaced

If reaching clouds peered inside the golden rays of sun
For sweet words to warm tomorrow's hours 
Would hearts made of stone awaken beating soft
To taste peaceful dew of grace as flowers

Surely now the clouds are reaching up in appreciation
For sanctuary found in the arms of reprieve
Perhaps if we too reach inside golden rays of sun
This coldness in our hearts, would leave

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Didn't know what else to do today but write.........we couldn't read each other. I missed everyone! I actually found this picture AFTER I wrote the poem, some things are just meant to be.

Surreal Art of Vladimir Kush he is so awesome

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"Surely now the clouds are reaching up in appreciation For santuary found in the arms of reprieve Perhaps if we too reach inside golden rays of sun This coldness in our hearts, would leave." Your words in this piece enfold my spirit and comfort me in a way that defies description.



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So lovely, I like it very much

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This is so beautiful!! loved every single line of it.. all imagery.. all the little details.. awesome!

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"would hearts made of stone awaken beating soft to taste peaceful dew of grace as flowers" love this line. It makes me think of a cold heart slowly coming around to appreciate grace

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"If reaching clouds peered inside the golden rays of sun
For sweet words to warm tomorrow's hours
Would hearts made of stone awaken beating soft
To taste peaceful dew of grace as flowers" A delicate write with blatantly wonderful imagery

Posted 13 Years Ago


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nice work Neva,,,if the hearts of all the world were touched by those golden rays of sun...we would all be in Heaven...nice...

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I love when I find a picture after a poem and it all fits - I always look for a picture after in case it biases the write LOL! great poem here Neva - "for sanctuary found in the arms of reprieve" - the sun - the coldness - nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


you have been on the MUSE today...wonderful use of lyrical prose...your forte.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is a very beautiful piece Neva. I love the last stanza. It does fit perfectly the picture with the poem. And yes I am a few days behind in my reading. xo : )

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Wonderful write and such beuatiful imagery.
enjoyable read.

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"If reaching clouds peered inside the golden rays of sun
For sweet words to warm tomorrow's hours
Would hearts made of stone awaken beating soft
To taste peaceful dew of grace as flowers" Gorgeous write, Delicious read!

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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