Painting in Colors of Love

Let me cradle your body in a promise that tumbles over the moon
When your life tends to be surrounded by a deep stillness
That leaves you wondering if you even know your destination
Or if calm waters your heart will find, or wander aimless

Let my words seep into the soil of your spirit as flaming arrows
Floating into your fears and so quickly piercing your skin
Until you can look at me and not be divided within your soul
Or be consumed by the places where emptiness begins

Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion
Sway your heart with eyes that paint in colors of love
So you will not remember this deep stillness that surrounds
Aimlessly wandering within your thoughts held thereof

Come and rest on the rock of memories forgotten long passed
While we look into the wilderness of each others soul
Until you can look at me and know we are not to be divided
Dive into these calm waters of mine and become whole

Author's Note

Artist: Christiane Vleugels - http://www.liveinternet.ru/community/3180911/post121210605/

Reviews

[kdpgrahi]

Signifies a great love I feel. Third stanza, "Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion
Sway your heart with eyes that paint in colors of love
So you will not remember this deep stillness that surrounds
Aimlessly wandering within your thoughts held thereof." so magnificent.

I liked it and digested it to my heart.

[Liza]

romantic declaration - your way with words is beautiful

[Winslow Des Totes]

As always gorgeous art and terrific flow! I especially liked the lines,
"Come and rest on the rock of memories forgotten long passed
While we look into the wilderness of each others soul
Until you can look at me and know we are not to be divided
Dive into these calm waters of mine and become whole"
Great job! :D

[WindSong]

A beautifully written poem. So much feeling evolves within the lines of gorgeous rhyme.

[Kenneth The Poet]

This reminds me of a rekindling of a deep passion, the kind that makes one yearn for it even in the darkest despair. This is very good, Neva. One of your best.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Sensually divine Neva, you got a winner there.
And the pic compliments your work totally!!

[Dream Weaver]

A beautiful perspective piece.
Swirling painted colors always
seem to go hand in hand with
love....

[joshua deathdealer]

Spectacular imagery. Very romantic and serene.

[Becky C Strukamp]

A feeling of calm engulfed me as I read this poem. You have beautifully penned a work of art.

[FallenWingz]

this is a beautiful explanation of true love...i love the flow..amazing.

[Poetic Beauty]

This has amazing imagery painted into the piece. Sometimes fear clouds our judgement and we should not let fear rule how we act or make decisions. I have done this recently and well it mess things up royally. I love the statements you make in this poem.