Painting in Colors of Love

Painting in Colors of Love

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Let my words seep into the soil of your spirit as flaming arrows.....

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Let me cradle your body in a promise that tumbles over the moon

When your life tends to be surrounded by a deep stillness
That leaves you wondering if you even know your destination
Or if calm waters your heart will find, or wander aimless

Let my words seep into the soil of your spirit as flaming arrows
Floating into your fears and so quickly piercing your skin
Until you can look at me and not be divided within your soul
Or be consumed by the places where emptiness begins

Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion
Sway your heart with eyes that paint in colors of love
So you will not remember this deep stillness that surrounds
Aimlessly wandering within your thoughts held thereof

Come and rest on the rock of memories forgotten long passed
While we look into the wilderness of each others soul
Until you can look at me and know we are not to be divided
Dive into these calm waters of mine and become whole

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist: Christiane Vleugels - http://www.liveinternet.ru/community/3180911/post121210605/

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Signifies a great love I feel. Third stanza, "Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion
Sway your heart with eyes that paint in colors of love
So you will not remember this deep stillness that surrounds
Aimlessly wandering within your thoughts held thereof." so magnificent.

I liked it and digested it to my heart.

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a panoply of beauty and simply gorgeous metaphors!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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painted with a wonderous pallet Neva once again

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The wilderness of my soul. Uncharted territory. You have done it again. Thank you Neva.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This was so beautiful and refreshing. I really loved the last part: "Dive into these calm waters of mine and become whole" Absolutely divine! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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You stir the senses and show that your love can truly transform another, filling them with wonder and beauty and passion for living... This is what some people long to find all their life.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Passionate words with a softness that makes each word a gift to the one you wrote for. The last stanza says almost too much, there's a private tenderness in it that should only be shared by two people .. wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love the way you make the poem flow. Spectacular poetry.

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Wow....that is so full of emotion..!So sensuous and sincere!Amazing Ma'am.Thank you :)

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Absolutely love it....wonderful words and imagery ...I'm mesmerized lol.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Bravo Neva, This is for certain one of my personal favorites of yours! It is so wonderfull to read and follow along on the journey it takes one on.

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Added on June 30, 2011
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Tags: body, promise, moon, soul, heart, love, poetry

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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