As If - You Wrote the Book of Me

As If - You Wrote the Book of Me

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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You read me as if you wrote the book of who I am............

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Who else could possibly understand me the way you do?  You read me as if you wrote the book of who I am. Despite the fact, sometimes I travel where darkness presses against the sun, laying down nothing when morning warms the sweetness of life.  


On those days, when time casually says I am crazy and wraps around in streams that haunt me with a quaint imprisonment, your smile moves through me in a delightful pleasure, caressing my face with your ways.

Sometimes I sit with my heart resting on the winds of pain and sorrow, lighting up fear and anger in never ending skies.  You wait, because you know just what to do, standing silent, by my side.

Who else could possibly understand me the way you do?  When it rains, you never try to change the air I breathe.  When my sun is eclipsed by clouds of time and space, you never deny me the chance to stand with my eyes closed, until I am brave enough to open them and see.

You read me as if you wrote the book of who I am.  As time passes, I see that what is unsaid, stares back with a message that arrives on golden wings. No one else understands me the way you do.  Your fingers turn the pages of my soul, as if you wrote the book of me.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
*For My Heart

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'When it rains you never try to change the air that I breathe...' that a grand compliment for someone who has captured the personality and life of another within the imaginationn, bringing to color what was once detailed in monochrome.

Delightful read...nicely penned with genuine emotion.



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When you can find that person who knows you better then yourself you should never let them go... another beautiful poem young lady.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Your work never ceases to amaze me. This poem with the continuous flowing style is like a window to your mind. The words, the train of thought, the poignant emotion. All of it combined is but the crux of the great writer that you are. Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow this is truly amazing Neva!
I really enjoyed this write.
So much emotion in this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A beautiful read, like that its different to your usual, the variety shown is admirable indeed :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Nice write...
I like it a lot..
Thank you for the RR..


~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Nice Ode to someone you love, beautiful and telling, nice description of feeling...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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to know what to do and when to do it..and to have someone who knows what to do and when to do it..and to live in this everyday would make this world a better place. some people we meet in this world help take the pain away they bring light and laughterand sometimes they know when to just be there..beside us.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I had chills with this write Neva... "fingers turn the pages of my soul, as if you wrote the book of me." That just sings to the heart of love..xx

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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