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A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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As if I am bound to live life uncut yet emptied of all pain.

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A soft image satisfies the deepest sea
found in your eyes
recognized as comfort.
Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly
into the arms
of old wounds suffered.  

Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul.

Scenes pass by of places with nowhere to go,
sailing as tributes tired of singing chords
without gain.
Still, I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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As a huge fan of your work Neva, you know I am above all honest in what I review,

"Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul. "

This stanze screamed at me, it encompasses the mere taste of human companionship and the reluctance to let go of sexual and loving affairs, well done, great read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Im loving this poem. Rich textures emote pure emotions drawn beautifully by delicate hands.

"Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is hands-down one of your best! You have learned to embrace every emotion. You are not ashamed to let it all out with every beautifully penned word.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful. Brilliant, talented use of words. Paints a picture full of insight.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i love this. especially the last stanza.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Such vivid colors fill your words, flowing with longing emotion.. finding release and refreshing.. a shared existence. Beautifully confessed and moving.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Those chords resonate more than we can stand at times! Neva, this is excellent work love..sometimes numbing to feel this..numbness can resign us...resignation can liberate us...I see so much in your work Neva..makes me truly think xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You smile magically as you are a great soul

Posted 8 Years Ago


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love your work..your pen has a sensual light touch..which brings your words to life

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maybe we humans are supposed to have troubles in life so we can discover our strengths and weaknesses; without knowing them we'd be
devoid of feelings, we'd be empty spiritless vessels. Seems, dear Neva, that you've felt the worst and won -. become a smooth pebble which is passed from one to another human being - and willingly. Your words inevitably set me flying, this is no exception!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The ending is very strong with imagery and words. It sucks when we are shadowed by misery and hurt.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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