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A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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As if I am bound to live life uncut yet emptied of all pain.

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A soft image satisfies the deepest sea
found in your eyes
recognized as comfort.
Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly
into the arms
of old wounds suffered.  

Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul.

Scenes pass by of places with nowhere to go,
sailing as tributes tired of singing chords
without gain.
Still, I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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As a huge fan of your work Neva, you know I am above all honest in what I review,

"Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul. "

This stanze screamed at me, it encompasses the mere taste of human companionship and the reluctance to let go of sexual and loving affairs, well done, great read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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dulcet... soft and flowing... a sweet breeze of emotions blew gently in my face as I read this poem... and I shivered. My skin had that very sweet shudder. The second stanza is harmonious. You cared every stanza artistically and brought emotions beautifully... Such an adorable write to read... A perfection in all the levels: The description, The imaginary, The scene ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this Neva, isn't more fulfilling and nice to live life raw and uncut? In certain aspects tha is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Jae
Absolutely gorgeous poem right here. It feels so human and alive with all of humanly needs. Very nice work.

~Rem

Posted 8 Years Ago


You know i have to say i really enjoyed this piece you are a fantasti poet. Keep writing i want to read more!

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow! i very nice piece you have written right here! not too long but not too short either. this has a hell of a lot of meaning!

great work!
Manda

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain."
Simply magic Neva x


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Scenes pass by of places with nowhere to go"
This was a fantastic piece but this line is haunting me and made this piece come that much more alive as i read it. The dark images rolling through the eyes of my mind trying to encompass all of what you say, and then seeing these places..places of misfortune and unwelcome. Places "with nowhere to go" and this saddened me. Such a wonderful piece, full of raw power that will without a doubt jump out at anyone who reads this. Lovely!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well well well .. this is what I would call ' An Inspired Write ' .. loved it .

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really amazing poem, and i love the way it flowed itself through the poem. And i want to say that, you've a great passion in writing dear friend...
:)


Posted 8 Years Ago


a richly layered piece that oozes contentment.
Beautiful, Neva!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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