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A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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As if I am bound to live life uncut yet emptied of all pain.

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A soft image satisfies the deepest sea
found in your eyes
recognized as comfort.
Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly
into the arms
of old wounds suffered.  

Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul.

Scenes pass by of places with nowhere to go,
sailing as tributes tired of singing chords
without gain.
Still, I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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As a huge fan of your work Neva, you know I am above all honest in what I review,

"Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul. "

This stanze screamed at me, it encompasses the mere taste of human companionship and the reluctance to let go of sexual and loving affairs, well done, great read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.



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this is an absolutely beautiful piece of writing. I think i was captured by the very first line!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

absolute beauty...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely amazing.

"the deepest sea
found in your eyes"

is such a wonderful image.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

hmmm searching for balance to "continue"at least to tread water and exist..and per chance to dream of More?...not yet.. to open those wounds is to hurt..more than the pain I can endure...SO no cutting....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Simply brilliant.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

As a huge fan of your work Neva, you know I am above all honest in what I review,

"Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul. "

This stanze screamed at me, it encompasses the mere taste of human companionship and the reluctance to let go of sexual and loving affairs, well done, great read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This was a campaign of relentless imagery.
A million thoughts ran through my mind.
What beautiful work. This is art that left
me feeling torn...between a rock and a hard place.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly
into the arms
of old wounds suffered."

Love this stanza in your poem.
Beautiful poem of love

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

'Still, I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain."

A few words can create a thousand thoughts.. excellent write Neva.. we all search for balance in all we do...x

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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