No Need to Ask

No Need to Ask

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I have felt the touch of your heart fleeing its way to safety............

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I have seen love embrace tears of a heart

 in winds of clarity,
waiting in the curve of a smile.  
It seems sweet lips
 serenade with songs breathing pleasure
 into tides
of the hardest miles.

I have known a rhyme to climb the mountains
 of idle hours reminding me
 I was born to create a dream.
 One that calls out
softly to you
 from the land of my heart’s
compassionate seams.

I have felt the touch of your heart fleeing
 its way to safety,
watching distance fade
 to a whispered mark.
When I pull it close my own flutters
 with no need to ask
 if you are my other part.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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In favor of the brevity of all things spoken to be the measure of the depth and quality of the feeling expressed....I would say that the 3rd Stanza should be the only stanza on this piece..it rivals anything you have written in about the last month..and that is making a very bold statement...the choice of art work is masterfully chosen...please add this to my crazy review group Neva?..Laury

Posted 9 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.



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Beautiful artwork and amazing words. Your words always filled with emotion and passion. Thank you for your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You never disappoint. Beautiful piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fully agree with Laury's comment with the difference that I wished the poem never stopped...

So pictorial...

Masterpiece

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Again..awesome balance...you stir the light to come forth from the darkness Neva!
xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This entire poem is beautiful,and it speaks clearly of love

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Another deliciously sweet piece that seems to come right out of my soul. Do you per chance have the ability to read my mind? It seems so quite often.
Thanks for sharing Ms. Flores

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I read this and my heart skipped a beat at the power if it. The grace and beauty, wrapped up in a bow of love. Stunning.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The hardest miles...when ones internal emotions are closing in on us and we tend to close up as we no longer want to feel...

I have seen love embrace tears of a heart
in winds of clarity,
waiting in the curve of a smile.
It seems sweet lips
serenade with songs breathing pleasure
into tides

Love comes in and heals the tears of a heart.

I love this!!!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was born to create a dream. Superb.....each word, with its destined brilliance! xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"A rhyme to climb the mountains . . . " Every word is a step taken further to the other part of your soul, your love. Beautiful Neva, I don't know how many time I can say it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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