Wrapped Around Instinct

Wrapped Around Instinct

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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My soul gazed pleasures state of mind.............

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A shifting veil of shadows

filled my vision
as if requiring breath aimlessly.
I drew fire into my veins
as my suitor,
when I sought out release.

Looking down upon the back
of my fingers
Warm contentment followed hopefully.
Picking up my hand,
understanding flamed
this fire in me.

A caress pledged half a dream.
Bit my lip suggestively.
Sweet and gentle touches
became phantoms
of hope,
welcoming in, seductive pleas.

Instinct wrapped around a veil
of shadows.  
Found everything ever wanted.
Desire left kisses
on my brow,
whispered cries that taunted.

My soul gazed pleasures
state of mind,
took a deep breath of me.
Drawing fire into my veins
as my suitor,
I gave myself…shamelessly.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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an intense escape into the fire of desire Neva...one can only grasp at the idea of your visual pleasures...within the searching of sensuality through a dream state or the actuality of pleasure of thyself this poetic escape is filled with random and stable pleasure...

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The final stanza says it all as shamelessly is the only way to live, flamed the fire in me - what an image of true romance you pen so naturally as you lead us gently through your tryst. Keep em' coming

Posted 9 Years Ago


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wonderful poem, a weightless poem that frees the spirit and allows the mind to fly, well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


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To address what we need/want and shamelessely is a feeling of freedom, as such..Neva..you art inspires and holds many depths to explore!
xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is so beautiful written with such desire washing through each line! Stunning!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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My soul gazed pleasures
state of mind,
took a deep breath of me.
Drawing fire into my veins
as my suitor,
I gave myself…shamelessly.

This is just intense....but the last 4 words....Neva..U a a firestarter...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece is on fire for me. The fire of desire is present in every line. Beautifully done Neva!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A shifting veil of shadows
brill opening line as is the rest as always Neva

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A caress pledged half a dream.
Bit my lip suggestively.
Sweet and gentle touches
became phantoms
of hope,
welcoming in, seductive pleas.

love this phrase Neva...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And shamelessly, fire set upon a bitten lip, creates a superb picture

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A brilliant potrayal of thoughts and skillfull use of imagery. The Picture fits in as well. So pretty. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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