Wrapped Around Instinct

A shifting veil of shadows
filled my vision
as if requiring breath aimlessly.
I drew fire into my veins
as my suitor,
when I sought out release.

Looking down upon the back
of my fingers
Warm contentment followed hopefully.
Picking up my hand,
understanding flamed
this fire in me.

A caress pledged half a dream.
Bit my lip suggestively.
Sweet and gentle touches
became phantoms
of hope,
welcoming in, seductive pleas.

Instinct wrapped around a veil
of shadows.  
Found everything ever wanted.
Desire left kisses
on my brow,
whispered cries that taunted.

My soul gazed pleasures
state of mind,
took a deep breath of me.
Drawing fire into my veins
as my suitor,
I gave myself…shamelessly.

Author's Note

Firebird by fhrankee on deviantArt.com

Reviews

[Art]

an intense escape into the fire of desire Neva...one can only grasp at the idea of your visual pleasures...within the searching of sensuality through a dream state or the actuality of pleasure of thyself this poetic escape is filled with random and stable pleasure...

[unknown]

Follow your instincts! Brilliant!

[Stella]

Awesome poem! These were my favorite lines : My soul gazed pleasures
state of mind,
took a deep breath of me.
Drawing fire into my veins
as my suitor,
I gave myself…shamelessly.

[Sleepless]

can relally relate to this well not me my bestfriend she did the sma ething !:) but really nice poem !:)

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Powerful piece, blew me away with the imagery. Beautifully written!

[Thea]

"Instinct wrapped around a veil
of shadows.
Found everything ever wanted.
Desire left kisses
on my brow,
whispered cries that taunted."

Really intense write...Well structured... :)))

[Seashell]

Strong desires of passion mixed with shameless seductive visions, suggest delight in pain.
Interesting and exciting write,
Thank you
Babs x

[Andreisfree]

"I game myself...shamelessly." - apt ending

[Jvl narasimharao]

Poetry and imagination seem to be your instinct.You should have been professor of poetry.But you became the muse for all of us, mere scribblers.I am really jealous of your creativity

[Muse]

I gave myself…shamelessly! This was Hot, but in a spiritual way. You found love in the sun and the breath around you, this in itself is very sensual. Favorited!

[Jibey]

Pulsing with the feeling of itense desire.. your hand writes of the dream and your fingers fulfill its longings