Taste of You

Taste of You

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Quivering inside my dreams are elaborate colors that dance on my tongue.........

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The bond between us

does not quite speak to the stars
as precious carvings
but as seeds of happiness.
Here you see me in thought
rearranging reflections inside a message
held in glass.

Far away I hold my breath
then let it out to chase dream-filled sleep.  
Soft sighs escape
streaming through the night
in shells of kisses
moving ultimately to form this lovely
smile I keep.

Quivering inside my dreams
are elaborate colors
that dance on my tongue.
I taste them as whispers of you.
The bond between us does not quite
speak to the stars, but here
in my dreams is sung.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist - Mihai Criste

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Neva, I really like this one, especially the lines I copied below... They could be a poem by themselves.

rearranging reflections inside a message
held in glass.

moving ultimately to form this lovely
smile I keep.

Quivering inside my dreams
are elaborate colors
that dance on my tongue.

but here
in my dreams is sung.



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I smiled through out the whole piece, so beautiful

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

6 Years Ago

Thank you Cassie :)
Brilliant!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have this ability to make me speechless. I don't know what it is, but you just write so well... I don't know what to say. This is fabulous. I wish I was this good. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poetry is born out of rich experience and a poetic insight into life that keeps one absorbed throughout.

Posted 7 Years Ago


great poem! I really enjoyed reading this... thanks for sharing(:
-chole

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

interesting piece. I love the way your lines flow and the images reach into my soul

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice work Neva...the bond between love and dreams flows within you and this poetic display filled with both...dreams and love

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breath-taking!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful work..xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


I envy. . .

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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