The Deepest Blue

The Deepest Blue

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I stand alone on this canvas of the starkest white midnight blue from love's palette of hues..............

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You lovingly painted me the deepest shade of blue

Softly wrapped me in a frame of golden hue
From the very first day you walked into my life
You painted me in your picture, without you

I stood alone on a canvas of the starkest white
Such a radiant speck of deepest blue
Smiling as you painted my heart into your hands
I watched from this picture without you

I am your masterpiece, one of a kind
Your own lovely creation of design to view
Forever to stand in the lonely halls of your flame
So hopelessly in love...with you

I stand alone on this canvas of the starkest white
Midnight blue from love's palette of hues
You can find me here in this picture without you
They call me......, "The Deepest Blue"

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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time can be a friend, it can also dim the brilliance of fond memories. that is why i believe in putting our happiest and saddest moments or experiences into verse or some other form of art. you have captured this very well with "the deepest blue"
once again you have touched a part of me with your art, thank you for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is so beautiful Neva ... i hope u are tranquil in your blueness and not lonely witin the canvas xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully done. I really enjoyed reading it. It's one of those that I like to read two or three times to really get the feel. You have a wonderful spark; don't let it fizzle out because you're clearly capable of wonderful work. I adore your style.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You're poem really got to me more the second time I read it.
It really is an incredible message. Thank you for posting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


old but good enjoyed your poem some times I post old ones just to see how my writing has evolved over the years ,, bring more oldies but goodies

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blue...can be calming but also passionate, this is a gorgeous piece of writing Neva.
Forever to stand in the lonely halls of your flame...love this line!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing, to be frank. Just amazing. And with the metaphor of blue, it pieces together well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is very deep and meaningful, Ever so wonderful.
Stright from the heart, So wonderful Neva!

Posted 10 Years Ago


To open your heart and have it on display, painted, if you will upon a canvas, showing an undying love and beauty....... as always Neva... majic

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw, I love BLUE...So beautiful...I love this piece, Neva...You seem full of inspiration...
:)))

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a wonderful picture, and yes time can do a lot especially within patience. Great poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 31, 2011
Last Updated on May 22, 2013
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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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