Exhaled as Poetry

Exhaled as Poetry

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Your words fall as leaves into the river of my heart‘s desire, come to life as I exhale them as poetry.........

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I feel your tenderness underneath my bare feet;
see my face as a reflection
of a flame, in your eyes.  
One thousand teardrops
fell from your heart,
love swallowed each one.
Tasting comfort inside a smile,
a heart grows fond of drinking
love’s replies.

Your words fall as leaves
into the river of my heart‘s desire,
come to life
as I exhale them as poetry.
Each breath I take
rises against another,
creating feelings inside my heart,
ringing in tones that listen to each thought;
bringing such a lovely peace
to me.

I am embraced by breezes
stirred from a lasting love
that has grown strong like an oak tree,
it bends but never breaks.
Love now sails as notes
pouring from my lips.
My heart leaps with joy
and sings replies perhaps unheard,
but felt with each breath
I take.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist *Yarek Godfrey

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I bet they hear them as well...how could they not?

Each breath I take
rises against another,
creating feelings inside my heart,
ringing in tones that listen to each thought;
bringing such a lovely peace
to me.

"I am embraced by breezes
stirred from a lasting love
that has grown strong like an oak tree,
it bends but never breaks.
Love now sails as notes
pouring from my lips.
My heart leaps with joy
and sings replies perhaps unheard,
but felt with each breath
I take."


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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beautifully explained,nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautful and really moving coming eep from the heart !:) love it !:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought you were leaving this site?
Anyhows.......

One thousand teardrops
fell from your heart,
love swallowed each one.
Tasting comfort inside a smile,
a heart grows fond of drinking
love’s replies.

simply gorgeous!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Powerful and beautiful words and artwork. Words can be magic. Create hope or knock someone down forever. I like the way you expressed your desire in this poem.
"Your words fall as leaves
into the river of my heart‘s desire,"
I tell people. Be careful what you say and do. Words and actions have consequences. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


I am carried away on the rivers of love cascading from your quill with this one Neva... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love, Love this poem, so many outstanding lines of romance! Each stanza became a favorite!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is love and desire, romance and passion totally wrapped in the most beautiful words .. they make me happily purr.

Posted 8 Years Ago


your poems are so lovely I like the flow always enjoy reading your work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful, words that flow from your pen is awesome. Can I use your pen?

Posted 8 Years Ago


We are lead by different things at different times , often by love , sometimes by instinct, also by duty. Should we ever pick only one. These words are tender and true , which makes them strong.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 11, 2011
Last Updated on September 17, 2011
Tags: breath, poetry, smile, tenderness, flame, teardrops

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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