Exhaled as Poetry

Exhaled as Poetry

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Your words fall as leaves into the river of my heart‘s desire, come to life as I exhale them as poetry.........

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I feel your tenderness underneath my bare feet;
see my face as a reflection
of a flame, in your eyes.  
One thousand teardrops
fell from your heart,
love swallowed each one.
Tasting comfort inside a smile,
a heart grows fond of drinking
love’s replies.

Your words fall as leaves
into the river of my heart‘s desire,
come to life
as I exhale them as poetry.
Each breath I take
rises against another,
creating feelings inside my heart,
ringing in tones that listen to each thought;
bringing such a lovely peace
to me.

I am embraced by breezes
stirred from a lasting love
that has grown strong like an oak tree,
it bends but never breaks.
Love now sails as notes
pouring from my lips.
My heart leaps with joy
and sings replies perhaps unheard,
but felt with each breath
I take.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist *Yarek Godfrey

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I bet they hear them as well...how could they not?

Each breath I take
rises against another,
creating feelings inside my heart,
ringing in tones that listen to each thought;
bringing such a lovely peace
to me.

"I am embraced by breezes
stirred from a lasting love
that has grown strong like an oak tree,
it bends but never breaks.
Love now sails as notes
pouring from my lips.
My heart leaps with joy
and sings replies perhaps unheard,
but felt with each breath
I take."


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Goosebumps Neva, I loved to read, and feel this stunning poem of yours.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Of all the things I missed when i was away from poetry it was your words that called me back the most.....the peaceful serenity, the joy from each read...wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I bet they hear them as well...how could they not?

Each breath I take
rises against another,
creating feelings inside my heart,
ringing in tones that listen to each thought;
bringing such a lovely peace
to me.

"I am embraced by breezes
stirred from a lasting love
that has grown strong like an oak tree,
it bends but never breaks.
Love now sails as notes
pouring from my lips.
My heart leaps with joy
and sings replies perhaps unheard,
but felt with each breath
I take."


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stunningly beautiful Neva!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just breathtaking. That is all I can say.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 11, 2011
Last Updated on September 17, 2011
Tags: breath, poetry, smile, tenderness, flame, teardrops

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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