I Will Be There to See

I Will Be There to See

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I will be in the valley where the sand meets the tree of fire................

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I will be in the valley
where the sand meets the tree of fire
and walls that close in
do not exist.
My arms have become part of the stars,
when I walk they enfold night
with a web
encircling a kiss.

My heart contains a spirit of love
I obtained from the sea,
when my skies were filled
with all that I know.
I am here in the valley in between time
and the place where the tree of fire
still glows.

Come and take my hand
when your morning is cold,
until all that is left
is how you remember me.
Then, when you look into the glass
where your face was alone,
I will always be there
to see.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Sorry to read to deep but the repeated tree of fire made me think if the burning bush where love received the ultimate test of faith and the valley and the sand also spoke of biblical references the valley of death I will not fear and the footprints in the sand where when you think you walk alone it turns out you were being carried. Love the emotional tug of your words and the gentle sadness it evokes. Beautifully done, keep em' coming

Posted 10 Years Ago


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"Come and take my hand
when your morning is cold,
until all that is left
is how you remember me."

Worded so perfectly.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a very emotional pull, soft yet constant, always there, as if beeing cought in an undertow. I love the biblical referances even if they are not screaming in your face. Very beautiful Neva.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what a great poem beautifully done keep em' coming

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poetry weaves itself into metaphors and ideas that many could not even interpret as anything but beautiful! "My arms have become part oft he stars, when I walk they enfold at night with a web encircling a kiss". So pretty Neva

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

missed reading yor writing thsi last two weeks tht i cluldnt log into writers cafe :) beautiful writing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful...Neva....just beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago


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"when you look into the glass
where your face was alone,
I will always be there
to see."

Such beautiful lines! So full of love!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written, so smooth!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and well penned!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 6, 2011
Last Updated on October 9, 2011
Tags: sea, skies, valley, sand, time, glass

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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