I Will Be There to See

I Will Be There to See

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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I will be in the valley where the sand meets the tree of fire................

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I will be in the valley
where the sand meets the tree of fire
and walls that close in
do not exist.
My arms have become part of the stars,
when I walk they enfold night
with a web
encircling a kiss.

My heart contains a spirit of love
I obtained from the sea,
when my skies were filled
with all that I know.
I am here in the valley in between time
and the place where the tree of fire
still glows.

Come and take my hand
when your morning is cold,
until all that is left
is how you remember me.
Then, when you look into the glass
where your face was alone,
I will always be there
to see.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Sorry to read to deep but the repeated tree of fire made me think if the burning bush where love received the ultimate test of faith and the valley and the sand also spoke of biblical references the valley of death I will not fear and the footprints in the sand where when you think you walk alone it turns out you were being carried. Love the emotional tug of your words and the gentle sadness it evokes. Beautifully done, keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


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wow...you always instigate readers towards fascination i think!
great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice one, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love the magic of your imagery--it never fails to carry me to a special place--

My heart contains a spirit of love
I obtained from the sea,
when my skies were filled
with all that I know.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Let me get my guitar, i hear the music in this one

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sorry to read to deep but the repeated tree of fire made me think if the burning bush where love received the ultimate test of faith and the valley and the sand also spoke of biblical references the valley of death I will not fear and the footprints in the sand where when you think you walk alone it turns out you were being carried. Love the emotional tug of your words and the gentle sadness it evokes. Beautifully done, keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You are all at sea, one with nature and the universe itself.

Brilliant work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked this verse the best:
"Come and take my hand
when your morning is cold,
until all that is left
is how you remember me.
Then, when you look into the glass
where your face was alone,
I will always be there
to see."

Posted 12 Years Ago


absolutely love your imagery and your ability to write amazing poetry, never seems to be a time I'm disappointed when I click a link to a poem whose author is Neva Flores ;)
the theme here seems to be about caring for someone who feels alone and entrapped by it, and your free spirit of warmth embrace is there for them... least that's what I gather from it... beautiful I say, and it goes without saying, you're definitely someone of natural born talent ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Another great write. Full of intense imagery I can almost picture myself in the places described looking.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm melting from this beautiful read. Great passion and I love the ending.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 6, 2011
Last Updated on October 9, 2011
Tags: sea, skies, valley, sand, time, glass

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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