Embroidered Heart

Embroidered Heart

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Lovely fields of vision seen in all the days of you. Sewn gently in the heart of hearts with silken threads of blue..........

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Lovely fields of vision seen

In all the days of you
Sewn gently in the heart of hearts
With silken threads of blue

Embroidered in the sky by stars
Drifting as to the sea
Stitched in love by the hand of time
Forever yours to be

Memories sweet, a picture there
Of love I have for you
Held in place by knots of love
Forever to hold true

Framed in love in the finest gold
Caught up in eternity
To stand in halls of love divine
For all the world to see

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist* Anne Farrall DoyleThe-Red-Shawl

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Very good, The flow is paced nicely for the piece and the structure fits well too. Inspirational and uplifting,I like it...!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very expressive and poetic. The imagery is both strong and delicate at the same time.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This picture with your poem melt in a such perfect way! When I read a poem, I always chose a sentence that I think it is the best insight of the poet. Here is the one that I chose in this poem: "Stitched in love by the hand of time" - how perfect this sentence it is!
*Mary*


Posted 9 Years Ago


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Beautifully expressed dear! I love the structure and the flow and your writing needs to be read out loud. It is too good to be locked inside one's mouth!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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It is a real joy to read this poem .

Posted 9 Years Ago


I know I already reviewed this, but coming back to it I can say that this appeals to me because of the structure of the poem itself! (It's similar to mine!)
I think you do very well with rhymes and yes, this is perfection!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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love the last stanza this is a great poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing flow, heart warming better still..
Nice one Neva xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


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A beautiful poem. I like the artwork also. The strong description made the artwork come to life.
"Held in place by knots of love
Forever to hold true"
I like the places you took me with your powerful poetry. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


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rolls off the tongue like honey..divine..and metered beautifully

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on November 3, 2011
Last Updated on November 3, 2011
Tags: heart, thread, embroidery, skies, blue, halls, frame, love

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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